Jack Ellison Poet Limerick

It's a Toss Up

Okay enough about me and my attributes
I'll bow to those proving worthier, won't dispute
Sometimes comes out poop
Or like a delicious soup
Other times a toss up and doesn't compute!

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Jan Allison October 5, 2017 at 6:19 AM You will be here for many more years to come my friend - do drop by my latest limerick lol i think it will raise a smile lol:-) hugs jan xx

Silent One October 4, 2017 at 9:42 AM Its never poop my friends, its the perfect ingredients for the soup.. Long may you post for years and years... Jack Ellison October 4, 2017 at 10:14 AM I plan to but I'm not in control of my own master plan! So far so good! I appreciate your good words SO!!!

Lim'Rik Flats October 4, 2017 at 8:52 AM Variety the spice of life//What some look for in a wife//Regular changing//and rearranging//accompanied by plenty strife. TOSS ON JACKSON!!! (it's all good!) Jack Ellison October 4, 2017 at 10:16 AM Strife in married life is unavoidable but it's all psrt of the game! IT'S ALL GOOD!!!!!!!

Russell Sivey October 4, 2017 at 8:47 AM Does not compute, does not compute!! What show does that remind you of? I surely loved this incredible write this morning! You have written a magnificent piece, such a fabulous poem, Great work!! Jack Ellison October 4, 2017 at 10:10 AM This computer age eh!!! Remember the old days?