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It's a Toss Up

Okay enough about me and my attributes I'll bow to those proving worthier, won't dispute Sometimes comes out poop Or like a delicious soup Other times a toss up and doesn't compute!

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Jan Allison

Date: 10/5/2017 6:19:00 AM

You will be here for many more years to come my friend - do drop by my latest limerick lol i think it will raise a smile lol:-) hugs jan xx

Silent One

Date: 10/4/2017 9:42:00 AM

Its never poop my friends, its the perfect ingredients for the soup.. Long may you post for years and years...

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/4/2017 10:14:00 AM

I plan to but I'm not in control of my own master plan! So far so good! I appreciate your good words SO!!!

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 10/4/2017 8:52:00 AM

Variety the spice of life//What some look for in a wife//Regular changing//and rearranging//accompanied by plenty strife. TOSS ON JACKSON!!! (it's all good!)

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/4/2017 10:16:00 AM

Strife in married life is unavoidable but it's all psrt of the game! IT'S ALL GOOD!!!!!!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/4/2017 8:47:00 AM

Does not compute, does not compute!! What show does that remind you of? I surely loved this incredible write this morning! You have written a magnificent piece, such a fabulous poem, Great work!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/4/2017 10:10:00 AM

This computer age eh!!! Remember the old days?