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It's a Strange Place

It's a very strange place when in dreams I chase phantasms, a figmant of imagination, or an apparition of warning from my soul, seeing what is hidden from the light of day. It's a very strange place and only an illusion of madness overtaking all the senses, crossing the line of reality into the realm of shadows that only I can dream.

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Date: 4/24/2024 9:47:00 PM
Chetta, I really like this poem. You have brought me along into your dreamscape. Sparse in words, yet very effective in conveying your dream experience. Well done. Carol Louise
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Chetta Achara
Date: 4/25/2024 6:08:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 4/23/2024 6:32:00 PM
Sleep seems to be a world with no doors. This is an interesting poem. I hope you have good dreams. I liked this poem.
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Date: 4/23/2024 5:35:00 AM
Your poem is soulful and intriguing. The message within your words tells me you're 'in tune' even when your dreaming. I appreciate that level of awareness. Have a wonderful day, Sara
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Date: 4/23/2024 4:20:00 AM
There is something very ethereal and cryptic in this, but it dips into my soul as easily as your dreams do in you, dear Chetta. You appear to be very aware of your soul, and that is always a good sign. Deliver it all to the hands of the Miracle worker and let that infinitesimal light bathe you, as it chases away every shadow. Love and light, Vie
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