It's a Shore Thing, Not a Sure Thing

I am not sure what it is
that lures me there
time and time again

perhaps it's the thunder
you can almost feel
like a heart racing
in anticipation
as you watch
the waves build
in a rhythmic peak
thrust forward
and climax
as they wet kiss the sand

perhaps it's the colors
the pink-lemonade splash
against almost bare flesh
as the cotton-candy clouds
appear to touch its edge
while a half risen sun
emerges from its depth

perhaps it's the treasures
it leaves behind
that mask its fury
with innocence
like childhood memories
within the depths of mind
that bring me back again

perhaps it's more...


Nostalgia contest
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Mcgee Avatar
July 5, 2019 at 11:01 AM
The pink lemonade splash against almost bare flesh...love your images. Congrats on your win.
Adams Avatar
July 5, 2019 at 3:19 PM
Thank you Jeanne :) hugs
Gondolf Avatar
July 5, 2019 at 9:00 AM
Sandy, your words paint a beautiful picture of the shoreline at dusk. Congrats on your win. John
Adams Avatar
July 5, 2019 at 10:53 AM
Thank you so much John....i think i am more drawn to the ocean since my parents are gone because that's where i have my fondest youthful memories~ hugs :)
Mcgee Avatar
June 25, 2019 at 7:35 PM
The title pulled me right in...I have a thing for the sea...This is fabulous!
Adams Avatar
June 26, 2019 at 6:20 AM
I love the ocean especially at sunrise when not many people are on it, you can hear the dolphins and seagulls playing while watching the sunrise from its edge~ Thank you
Lamoureux Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 10:30 AM
It' good to have you back Sandra.
Hicks Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 2:07 PM
Oh and your title makes my love-for-puns soul giddy! Lol... very cool!
Adams Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 2:09 PM
lol, thanks....
Hicks Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 2:06 PM
You're a very introspective writer. You write in ways that are suggestive, rather than implicit ... I like that. I personally like the foggy Oregon coastline where you can walk for hours, not even realizing you're not wearing shoes; where certain coast lines sound almost to "crackle" as the water glides over it. I like the beach, but I live 10 hours away and don't visit very often!
Adams Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 2:13 PM
i seem to do that alot...or deep metaphors....one of my first poems on here was called writers suicide...it suggested something in graphic detail but was talking about something else.... the beach is one of my favorite places...i love the walks alone...maybe its because my family is gone and it's where we spent the most family time as a unit...who knows
Nunez Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 6:51 PM
Perhaps it's more... a wealth of meaning and expectation in those three words. "as they wet kiss the sand" is both an innocent and erotic line. I like your writing style, Sandra. The right combination of words elevates a write to real poetry... Will always try to come back for more read...hugs
Adams Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 2:14 PM
thank you Kim...i often pull nature in to my poetry, though they are often sad i try to bring some lighter images for balance...hugs
B. Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 4:56 PM
Pink lemonade splash as well as cotton candy clouds. I love these images. Great piece!
Dietrich Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 9:02 PM
how I love your poetry, Sandra.you are BACK and this is amazing!!! Was it for sea shore contest?
Adams Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 3:58 AM
it was but i felt my muse was rusty, so i wrote the other and withdrew this one...now i don't know which i like better
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 11:16 PM
What a stunning passionate piece Sandra! I love reading your poetry. #7
Adams Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 9:51 AM
thank you...this was my first musing in about 2 years..wasn't sure if i was thrilled with it~ hugs
Callus Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 3:53 PM
A poem after my heart...beautiful in its 'simple' presentation, but teeming with poetic emotion. Full marks to you! ~ Regards // paul
Adams Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 9:51 AM
thank you so much, nature often inspires me or is the mask in my emotions
Lamoureux Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 9:41 AM
Clever and enjoyable.
Adams Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 5:10 PM
thank you...been quite some time since i have written....
Andresen Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 3:41 AM
- Often we have to look for answers in our inner - A great poem, Sandra - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Adams Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 5:11 PM
thank you...trying to coax my muse to come and play again...been too long...hugs
Mcdaid Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 6:27 PM
Beautifully painted piece Sandra wishing you a blessed week ahead
Adams Avatar
February 2, 2016 at 5:11 PM
thank you my sweet friend...hugs
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