It's a Lovely Day

It’s a lovely day; I want to play.
Outside I’ll tag the first big bug I see.
Pretending that it might be chasing me,
I’ll cry, “You’re IT,” as I then run away.
Then I’ll have myself a private relay
while running backwards as I shout with glee,
“It’s a lovely day.”

When the sun is shining, inside why stay?
It’s sweet when there’s no gloom from which to flee,
so until the end of my little spree,
twirling or scissor walking home, I’ll say,
“It’s a lovely day.”

Oct. 23, 2022
For Jeff Kyser's Rousing Rondine Poetry Contest
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Walker Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 10:07 AM
Beauty expressed so magically with your words.
DiMino Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 6:40 PM
A lovely poem as well! "With the sun is shining, inside why stay?" Outside and inside of you, the light is shinning. Have fun. You deserve it. Blessings my friend. Keep splashing sunshine.
Gregory Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 1:24 PM
A lovely piece that's involvement fill, your action pack imagery and escape is simple yet stays in me, you running backward while your arms everywhichway enriches the piece on a funny theme. A lovely piece Andrea.
Hawley Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 10:41 AM
Such a playful tone in your poem! Tag, that bug, "you're it!"
Y. Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 9:08 AM
WoW! Andrea, What a good entry for the contest theme. It's all about “ one’s perspective. “ All hell can be breaking out all around you, but you can see “ a lovely day” with the proper perspective. Well done, my friend. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Have a great day-Alexis
Kendrick Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 8:10 AM
It's a lovely day today so whatever you got to do just do it in this lovely day its true. Reads like a good contender for the contest to me ..Way to go. Thanks for sharing and reminding me of that song and for dropping by my page. Sara
Seeker Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 4:57 AM
Beautiful! I want to play too!
Buhagiar Avatar
October 24, 2022 at 3:47 AM
It's a lovely poem. Do read mine. Bet you'll love it.
Horsman Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 9:17 PM
A joyous poem Andrea love it.
Poet Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 3:37 PM
You have portrayed a beautiful day, Andrea, full of the unfettered innocence of a youngster at leisure; I wish you the best of success in the contest.
Andresen Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 12:29 PM
- A cheerful poem ... playfully ... on a lovely day, Andrea :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs
Kavanagh  Avatar
October 23, 2022 at 12:22 PM
The innocence of a child at play captured naivety, without a care in the world, it’s a lovely day portrayed Andrea, all the best for contest, cheers David
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