Itb Saw Tahw Tub

BUT WHAT WAS IT? 

I cannot believe she would really take it
But it mattered not since she was about to grip my heart and break it
During all the hub-bub, tumult and chaos she stopped and said “Go get it”
And even if it wanted to stay she would not let it
She knew that what she was taking was taking the she I had when she was not around
But I’ve heard tell that even sailors sometimes cry when their ship runs aground 
And if they wanted to look as if they were dying no one had fake it
But I wouldn’t give a s**t because she remembered to take it

Now she can treat it to an opera or a day by the deep blue sea
They can do whatever they choose without me
How can a woman take a dream, a heart, desire with fidelity and so forsake it?
S**t, I still can’t believe she was cruel enough to take it
Now all I have is time to bide
Since the lady I love so much left and took my pride
   
             © 2011.……Phreepoetree
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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May 12, 2011 at 6:14 PM
This is so passionate . You very brave to expose your feelings , very real, very raw.
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