It Would Be Nice

For once I would like to walk a world that is built true and right

Just once I would like to see a sunrise not filled with darkest night

Yes I would like to see a caring hand reaching out to me

Not trying to get in my pocket while telling me I am free

The house of cards built in our yards trembling from the venal breeze

Be very careful should that howling wind chance to make us sneeze

Tumbling in that disaster scattered much like winters blowing leaves

The ribs of our umbrella tattered remnants scattered upon polluted sod

That glorious umbrella once covered by, “One Nation under God”
.
Puffy clouds are my dreams scattered upon the poisoned skies

The stories of my childhood lay before my tear filled eyes

Why you ask do I feel so low consumed with words so dark

Experience accrued by living so long to me you should now hark

Friends and strangers I tell you true it don’t have to be this way

Truly we are the directors and writers of life’s glorious play

Time to set aside our differences and join in common need

Time to settle all the conflict driven by the greed

Please remember when you’re driving do so with your eyes

Because if you try to do it with your ears all of mankind dies.

Look at all the strife, disenfranchised, social illness, hunger, and if that does tell you 
it is broke, broke, broke there is nothing more I can say, except goodbye.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 12/24/2010 12:02:00 PM
Very well written and I just love the imagery and detail! Looking forward to reading more.. Dana'lynn
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