It Would Be All So Great -The Monchielle Style
~It Would Be All So Great~
(Monchielle)
It would be all so great
If people were more kind
And just show more kindness
But world is so very blind
There's evil sin blindness
It would be all so great
If world embrace love peace
Was happy, never sad
A place of so much joy
Showing kid's faces more glad
It would be all so great
If people show more love
Where folks would get along
With no more greed, hatred
Where anyone would sing song
It would be all so great
If there was no cancer
Hunger, abuse, no more death
Where every man loves God
With their soul, heart and breath.
Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2012
May.21.2016
~Author's Notes:
The "Monchielle" is a poetry form or style created by Jim T. Henriksen.
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