It Will Happen Tomorrow

I sense myself wide awake
Although I am deep in dream
It's like an altered state

Sights and sounds engulf my mind
Not today's but a different kind
When I re-awake what will I find

Strange noises surround my thoughts
I feel frightened by body in fraught
What I feel now, what has my mind sought

High pitched sounds like a banshee's wail
I try to decipher but to no avail 
Like something hinders my subconscious trail

I awake from this dream, to the city noise
It has a different sound from the modern joys
They appear erratic, a twisted poise

From my penthouse flat I view the streets
People are wandering, there's a different beat
Friction aplenty, in daily greet

There's cars crashed, fire's burning
Bodies lying, people turning
I'm in confusion, my minds churning

To my balcony I go, to my telescope
As i view the city, I nearly choke
The newspaper seller looks a different bloke

He wanders aimlessly, in his selling place
His eyes have gone from his rounded face
What cause would permit this visual displace

As i meander my view, I witness other sights
People with no mouths, another blight
Oh no! others faceless, my city in plight

Carrion eaters in plentiful greed
Plumes of smoke from the oxygen feed
Somethings turned against my human breed

I venture down, to determine the extent
To fathom out where the previous days went
Why is this happening, what has the world been sent




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Sweetheart Avatar
October 18, 2009 at 7:52 AM
Awesome verse James and what a message... so poignant ... keep going forward... things will happen in their own time... timing is the key to this life ... thankxxx for your comments on my Butterfly poem... and all the others... just found out I won Brian's Contest Imagine ... to go with Summer Evening painting.. my poem, Captive. Your support and encouragement mean so much to me and my verses...
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October 3, 2009 at 6:44 AM
James, sounds like NYC during 9/11. Your writings are so descriptive and you can close your eyes and picture everything vividly. Keep writing because you aren't afraid to let the reader know your true feelings. For a man to be able to do this - is truly amazing. Love, Kelly
Freeman Avatar
October 1, 2009 at 9:24 AM
James like the battle of Armageddon aftermath, or so it would seem, your write diplexes. Sincerely, Moses
Brown Avatar
October 1, 2009 at 5:09 AM
Oh my goodness, edge of the seat reading, locking of my doors and windows fright, love of your writing,........Please James don't eat any more spicy food before retiring for the night keep those nightmares at bay.. Love, Carol
Chircop Avatar
September 30, 2009 at 10:07 PM
Terrible dream,people without faces,fog,fire,destruction,the persona seems passing through troubled moments,hope all is well,different write today and i loethi style too,bravo--Charma
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September 30, 2009 at 7:47 PM
What a terrifying nightmare, James. People with no faces, a city on fire. Please turn your thoughts to a sweet Caribbean island before you shut off the lights tomorrow night. Very compelling. Wish I could interpret the meaning of this dream, but the chaos is very disturbing. (I have dreams similar to this; thought they were mine alone -- something else we share.) Love you! Carolyn
Hilliker Avatar
September 30, 2009 at 7:39 PM
Great rhyme and flow, James. I really appreciate your styles. You're very gifted. Thanks, Kim
Null Avatar
September 30, 2009 at 7:28 PM
Frightening to think such a horrible thing could happen. Very real concept...Karla
Culverhouse Avatar
September 30, 2009 at 5:31 PM
nicley penned, mysterious
Canady Avatar
September 30, 2009 at 3:27 PM
Vivid Dream World... (or should I say Nightmare)... In my Younger Years, I used to dream I was always being chased by something meanacing... but one dream I had... I was falling into a donut (no lie !) Anyways, they could make a good movie out of this one Highlander MoonBee
Peranteau Avatar
September 30, 2009 at 2:40 PM
I'll tell you Sir James,...your dream is a moment of silence,...for you to utter ! Great one Sir ! james
Kendrick Avatar
September 30, 2009 at 2:39 PM
Nice rhyme. Don't like the topic but we all have our taste. Good job. Keep writing. Sara
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