It Will Follow You

Blackness comes tonight.
          No matter how far you run,
               Darkness will follow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Freeman Avatar
February 12, 2010 at 10:26 AM
Bree, Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Sincerely, Moses
Bagnall Avatar
February 12, 2010 at 4:22 AM
On one level a really good true Haiku, on another level, it's the first horror Haiku I've read - loved it
Austin Avatar
February 9, 2010 at 12:09 PM
Dat be da shadow you be talkin' bout. Congrats on this selection. Like it. Love, daver
Culverhouse Avatar
February 8, 2010 at 2:40 PM
way to go!!
Fraser Avatar
February 8, 2010 at 11:05 AM
Congratulations on being featured on the home page this week with your poetry >> James
Brown Avatar
February 8, 2010 at 10:05 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. May you have many more Bree. Love, Carol
Fisher Avatar
February 8, 2010 at 6:05 AM
Many congrats on your fine featured piece. Rgds Janette
Crane Avatar
February 7, 2010 at 4:14 PM
this haiku is deep and speaks on high volumes :) .. great work ..- Marcus Crane
Goff Avatar
November 13, 2009 at 5:52 PM
intense! ......I feel this way often! Bree! you speak truth! jimbo
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