It Was You

It was you from the moment I seen you.
I knew in my heart I would be the one to rescue you, but in the end you ended up saving me.
I see in your eyes the pain that lingered inside.
From your past relationships your pride was on cloud nine.
My theory was to put your fears aside.
You feel like I am like all the rest, so you continuously put my love through a test.
Why won’t you let me love you?
My love is a virtue, forever lasting external statue.
It was you my handcrafted imbue tattoo I cling to.
If you only knew how I truly feel about you.
I was sculpted only for you my sahib, I am your rib.
You’re a reflection of me desperately wanting love, but scared of the many risks that come with it.
Love should have come with an asterisk.
You’re my only weakness causing infectious affection.
It was your personality that spoke volumes to me, showering me with chivalry.
Persistency kept me where I wanted to be.
Let me be the one you need, all you need is faith as tiny as a mustard seed.
Abundantly this love will be an adjustment for you, and me.
If you should have a nightmare just know I will be there.
If you’re hurting and need to cry, I will be the one to wipe your eyes.
For my love only identifies.
I fell in love with you, not for the things you’re able to do.
                  It was simply you…
If you should happen to get laid off work, I will be the one standing in the door.
The only one you brace oneself for.
Your personal landing gear, I am whole heartily sincere.
I will be your rocking chair.
If the time comes and you begin to lose your hair, baby I will be your favorite barber chair your personal concierge.
It was you that introduced your love voodoo.
Only wanting you timeless déjà vu.
You made me love you; you are my lifetime band aid.
Now let me be your brigade, your right hand grenade.
You’re forever nursing aide.
The sharpest in your drawer knife blade.
The one and, only ace of spade your jack of trades.
Equivalent to money your love is symbolic.
A polished rocket you’re extraordinary, and solid.
Biologic process but simply flawless.
If I am getting off topic I might be losing conscious.
Thinking of you makes me forget my surroundings.
My heart starts pounding echo sounding.
I automatic start smiling, it’s simply astounding. 
You knew it has always been you.
           It was you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 6/13/2016 12:04:00 PM
wow.. great poem good description
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Date: 12/23/2015 5:16:00 AM
Hi Twanna. Congrats for having your poem featured in the poetrysoup homepage! ;-)
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Date: 12/3/2014 7:36:00 AM
A poem that reflects the yearning of the heart for true love and affection. Beautiful verses expressing deep emotions that captivate the readers soul. Excellent work dear, Twanna. Welcome!
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Twanna Irisha
Date: 12/3/2014 8:03:00 AM
Thank you Demetrius, that's exactly what I was going for. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Date: 12/3/2014 3:29:00 AM
happiness or un-hap.... darkness sorrow...mishap... the suffering most dont enjoy, great poem you here employ, keep at it as i clap...
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Twanna Irisha
Date: 12/3/2014 7:21:00 AM
Thank you Don for taking time to read my poem. Deeply appreciated. :)
Date: 11/4/2014 3:34:00 AM
Seems love has finally found its place in your life as well. This piece shows it...and it was powerfully expressed. :)
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Twanna Irisha
Date: 11/4/2014 8:26:00 AM
Thanks Pace, but no love found here. Simply day dreaming.
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