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It Was the Last Room, That She Laid In

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It was the last room, that she laid in; Warm to the touch, in that instant; In within the blink of an eye; she did flown, fled flied flown; unto the bosom of Our Lord; Room full of ceramics, porcelain; Colored dry walled olden wood laminated floor; laying down rested, blessed look like she was sleeping; Like in a family reunion house full of children; Yet non breath, vessel full of stillness; It was the last room, that she laid in; Spirit has left her she has flown; Cool to the touch now she's been gone; In within the blink of an eye; she did flown, fled flied flown; unto the bosom of Our Lord; It was the last room, that she laid in; vessel body flesh dead, body laid still on the floor; Yet her truest self gone on to be with the Lord; Cool to the touch now she's been gone; In within the blink of an eye; she did flown, fled flied flown; fly soul fly spirited freed to the sweet by N by; In within the blink of an eye; dead to the world, yet alive in spirit; It was the last room, that she laid in; laid on the hard wooden vinyl floor body dead; It was the last room, that she laid in; It was the last room, that she laid in; 5/1/23 Written words by James Edward Lee Sr. 2023©

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