Lala Merx Poet I do not know?

It Was Only Me

*All those monsters, you were talking about
...........They were replaced by cute bunnies and cuddly bears
*All those dark shadows you were complaining about
..........Sunlight diminished them
*All the demons that were scaring you
..........They were nothing. I scared them away now
*They're all gone now
.........Behold, your great hero is here!
*All your fears
..........I hope you conquer them
*I'm sorry 
..........Hush now, Child
*I promise you
..........I'll protect you
*It was only me.

(now read only the lines with asterisks*)
*This is only a feeble attempt, i was just practicing,
tell me about your suggestions please :)
Plus, i don't know what kind of poetry this is

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Tim Smith February 22, 2014 at 8:40 AM I liked this a lot Lala...Master it and a new form can be named after you...Hugs Tim Lala Merx February 22, 2014 at 11:35 PM That would be an honor, really. But i do believe that this was already made use by other poets years older than me.

Robert Pettit February 22, 2014 at 12:49 AM An interesting write. I believe this can be classified as "free verse". Lala Merx February 22, 2014 at 12:54 AM Finally, Thank you :) I have much to improve on that though, Thank you again and God Bless :) -Lala