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It Was One of Those Mornings

We bid farewell to our eldest daughter In her marriage ceremony with full honour The traditional farewell by a brother To his sister that morn was an emotional crusher The following morning we had a visitor A talking parrot found our home cosier He fluttered around and called out 'Father' We adored our little addition, my husband's admirer March 20, 2016 Contest :It Was One Of Those Mornings Sponsor : Sara Kendrick

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Paul Callus

Date: 3/26/2016 12:55:00 PM

A 'loss' and 'gain' contrasting mornings. The first is very emotional, especially for the mother; the 2nd comes with a lovely smile:) Congratulations on this fine win, Balveen. ~ regards // paul

Balveen Cheema
Date: 3/28/2016 8:35:00 AM

Thanks Paul! Regards...

Anisha Dutta

Date: 3/26/2016 10:45:00 AM

Congrats Balveen to win. Hugs. Anisha D

Balveen Cheema
Date: 3/26/2016 11:57:00 AM

Thanks Anisha!

Eve Roper

Date: 3/25/2016 8:49:00 PM

Balveen, congratulations on your win!!! Hugs Eve

Balveen Cheema
Date: 3/26/2016 11:58:00 AM

Thanks Eve!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/24/2016 6:02:00 PM

this is so cute!! What a great memory and congrats in the contest

Balveen Cheema
Date: 3/26/2016 11:59:00 AM

Thanks Andrea!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/24/2016 4:28:00 PM

Your poem was delightful so glad that you had a good day after “It Was One Of Those Mornings” that really wasn’t awesome.. Congratulations on your placement..Sara

Balveen Cheema
Date: 3/26/2016 12:00:00 PM

Thanks Sara! It was a sweet competition!