Balveen Cheema Poet Rhyme

It Was One of Those Mornings

We bid farewell to our eldest daughter
In her marriage ceremony with full honour
The traditional farewell by a brother
To his sister that morn was an emotional crusher

The following morning we had a visitor
A talking parrot found our home cosier
He fluttered around and called out 'Father'
We adored our little addition, my husband's admirer

March 20, 2016
Contest :It Was One Of Those Mornings
Sponsor : Sara Kendrick

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Paul Callus March 26, 2016 at 12:55 PM A 'loss' and 'gain' contrasting mornings. The first is very emotional, especially for the mother; the 2nd comes with a lovely smile:) Congratulations on this fine win, Balveen. ~ regards // paul Balveen Cheema March 28, 2016 at 8:35 AM Thanks Paul! Regards...

Anisha Dutta March 26, 2016 at 10:45 AM Congrats Balveen to win. Hugs. Anisha D Balveen Cheema March 26, 2016 at 11:57 AM Thanks Anisha!

Eve Roper March 25, 2016 at 8:49 PM Balveen, congratulations on your win!!! Hugs Eve Balveen Cheema March 26, 2016 at 11:58 AM Thanks Eve!

Andrea Dietrich March 24, 2016 at 6:02 PM this is so cute!! What a great memory and congrats in the contest Balveen Cheema March 26, 2016 at 11:59 AM Thanks Andrea!

Sara Kendrick March 24, 2016 at 4:28 PM Your poem was delightful so glad that you had a good day after “It Was One Of Those Mornings” that really wasn’t awesome.. Congratulations on your placement..Sara Balveen Cheema March 26, 2016 at 12:00 PM Thanks Sara! It was a sweet competition!

Vladislav Raven March 24, 2016 at 6:20 AM Hi Balveen, Congratulations on your win in the contest. I enjoyed the read....Vlad. Balveen Cheema March 26, 2016 at 12:01 PM I'm glad you did, Vlad and many thanks!

Susan Gentry March 23, 2016 at 4:10 PM So real 1st verse. So cute 2nd verse. Congratulations on your placement! I enjoyed it. Balveen Cheema March 23, 2016 at 8:50 PM Thanks Susan! Both are factual!

Lin Lane March 22, 2016 at 12:41 PM Well done and congrats, Balveen. Balveen Cheema March 23, 2016 at 8:49 PM Thanks Lin!

Richard Lamoureux March 20, 2016 at 3:23 PM Quite the morning! Balveen Cheema March 20, 2016 at 7:35 PM Well their marriages were a sort of mixed bags!