Beautiful Scars Poet Rhyme

It Was One of Those Mornings

~It Was One Of Those Mornings Contest~
Sponsor: Sara Kendrick

Stanza I

Nauseous and dizzy first thing in the morning,
this baby was conceived without any warning!
I smell coffee and poor me can't have a cup,
walking towards the bathroom I tripped on the pup!
Pressed start on the blender to make a smoothie,
oh no! I can't believe once again I feel woozy!


Stanza II

Ahhhh...feel so rested from my good night of sleep,
I just love the feeling of baby boy kicking with his feet!
Sweet lil' Ella just came in for a good morning visit,
hugs and kisses, oh how much I love my life, I'll admit!
Mmmmm...I smell bacon! My house is so heartwarming,
for once I had a wonderful and memorable morning!

~Date Written: March 1, 2016~

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Balveen Cheema March 26, 2016 at 11:18 AM Very motherly! Congrats on your win, Laura!

Eve Roper March 25, 2016 at 8:48 PM Laura, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

Sara Kendrick March 24, 2016 at 4:30 PM Your poem was delightful so glad that you had a good day after “It Was One Of Those Mornings” that really wasn’t awesome.. Congratulations on your placement..Sara..The nausea of morning sickness is awful but food is so good once one gets through that time..Enjoyed reading your personal touch work..

Vladislav Raven March 24, 2016 at 11:17 AM Hi Luloo, Congratulations on your win in the contest. I enjoyed both stanzas Laura, they were both written well, crafted in your Rhyme form. I enjoyed this, it goes onto my faves. Hugs....MIKE.

Susan Gentry March 23, 2016 at 4:54 PM Congratulations on your placement in this contest! I remember those days very well. Enjoyed this.

Paul Callus March 23, 2016 at 3:08 PM Enjoyed these two contrasting family-based mornings, Laura! I can smell coffee and bacon, but I can't bring myself to knock on your door:) ~ Congratulations on a tasty win! ~ Regards // paul

Lin Lane March 22, 2016 at 12:43 PM Well done on your placement in this one, Luloo. Beautiful Scars March 22, 2016 at 1:32 PM Thank you Sweet lady :)-luloo

CayCay Godwin March 20, 2016 at 10:05 PM Well-done - I love it! CayCay (is there something to share/tell?) Beautiful Scars March 22, 2016 at 1:32 PM No nothing to tell!! lol -thanks CayCay :)-luloo

Daniel Turner March 1, 2016 at 2:56 PM Although very few women admit it, the husband is just as nervous as they are. They suffer everything except the physical pain and some men even have morning sickness. All of that to say pregnancy, although rewarding, is a b***h. I'm happy that you have a wonderful family and write such great poems. Peace to you dear Laura:) Beautiful Scars March 1, 2016 at 3:19 PM Thank you:) I had a great pregnancy so I'm grateful