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It Was One of Those Mornings

~It Was One Of Those Mornings Contest~ Sponsor: Sara Kendrick Stanza I Nauseous and dizzy first thing in the morning, this baby was conceived without any warning! I smell coffee and poor me can't have a cup, walking towards the bathroom I tripped on the pup! Pressed start on the blender to make a smoothie, oh no! I can't believe once again I feel woozy! Stanza II Ahhhh...feel so rested from my good night of sleep, I just love the feeling of baby boy kicking with his feet! Sweet lil' Ella just came in for a good morning visit, hugs and kisses, oh how much I love my life, I'll admit! Mmmmm...I smell bacon! My house is so heartwarming, for once I had a wonderful and memorable morning! ~Date Written: March 1, 2016~

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Balveen Cheema

Date: 3/26/2016 11:18:00 AM

Very motherly! Congrats on your win, Laura!

Eve Roper

Date: 3/25/2016 8:48:00 PM

Laura, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/24/2016 4:30:00 PM

Your poem was delightful so glad that you had a good day after “It Was One Of Those Mornings” that really wasn’t awesome.. Congratulations on your placement..Sara..The nausea of morning sickness is awful but food is so good once one gets through that time..Enjoyed reading your personal touch work..

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/24/2016 11:17:00 AM

Hi Luloo, Congratulations on your win in the contest. I enjoyed both stanzas Laura, they were both written well, crafted in your Rhyme form. I enjoyed this, it goes onto my faves. Hugs....MIKE.

Susan Gentry

Date: 3/23/2016 4:54:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in this contest! I remember those days very well. Enjoyed this.

Paul Callus

Date: 3/23/2016 3:08:00 PM

Enjoyed these two contrasting family-based mornings, Laura! I can smell coffee and bacon, but I can't bring myself to knock on your door:) ~ Congratulations on a tasty win! ~ Regards // paul

Lin Lane

Date: 3/22/2016 12:43:00 PM

Well done on your placement in this one, Luloo.

Lu Loo
Date: 3/22/2016 1:32:00 PM

Thank you Sweet lady :)-luloo

Caycay Jennings

Date: 3/20/2016 10:05:00 PM

Well-done - I love it! CayCay (is there something to share/tell?)

Lu Loo
Date: 3/22/2016 1:32:00 PM

No nothing to tell!! lol -thanks CayCay :)-luloo

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/1/2016 2:56:00 PM

Although very few women admit it, the husband is just as nervous as they are. They suffer everything except the physical pain and some men even have morning sickness. All of that to say pregnancy, although rewarding, is a b***h. I'm happy that you have a wonderful family and write such great poems. Peace to you dear Laura:)

Lu Loo
Date: 3/1/2016 3:19:00 PM

Thank you:) I had a great pregnancy so I'm grateful