It Was Near Midnight (Adult In Nature)

It was near midnight when I entered:
She was asleep; the moon was shining
Through her window, lighting up
The dangling satin of her blanket.

She lay face up,
Bare breasts parted,
And as she slept, her life was sill
As a saucer of water.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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November 10, 2009 at 3:59 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Will. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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