It Was Enough

He rode his horse 'cross the plains wild and free
Toward that special place where mountains rise
He owed no man, the land was his to see
It was enough, 'til he recalled her eyes

She'd been sixteen and he had found first love
They talked and laughed and gazed at glittered skies
While he held her hand and thanked God above
The world was his - he marveled at its size

Then she was gone, she had just slipped away
And he was left alone among the cows
He still owned the world and the light of day -
He held it close with all the here's and now's

Mountains rose and he whistled in surprise
It was enough 'til he recalled her eyes

September 11, 2016
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Roper Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 2:40 PM
Larry, I love your poem , I like Charlie's advice :) congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
Bradfield Avatar
September 25, 2016 at 12:19 AM
Thank you, Eve...I enjoyed the contest!.Larry
Scars Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 2:37 PM
Larry-wonderful sonnet dear friend...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
Bradfield Avatar
September 25, 2016 at 12:18 AM
Thank you so much, luloo!
Smith Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 11:04 AM
This is your style, don't change a thing, congratulations Larry...
Bradfield Avatar
September 25, 2016 at 12:17 AM
Thank you, Charlie! What a nice thing to say...Larry
Bhattacharya Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 5:01 AM
Nicely written with a mournful note, Larry. ---Sarban
Bradfield Avatar
September 17, 2016 at 9:42 PM
Thank you!..Larry
Logan Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 3:45 AM
This is a good sonnet but there is room to tighten up into a great sonnet. Keith Logan the happy chappy
Bradfield Avatar
September 12, 2016 at 10:10 AM
Thanks, Keith..I plead ignorance for being new at this..When you say "tighten" I don't know what that means. Give me a tutorial and I'll give it a [email protected]
Turner Avatar
September 11, 2016 at 9:51 PM
This is an excellent sonnet, Larry I really enjoyed the read:)
Bradfield Avatar
September 11, 2016 at 9:58 PM
Thank you, Daniel. I appeciate your comment!!.Larry
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