Get Your Premium Membership

It Was April

It was April when I met you~ Your eyes as deep as the ocean's bosom exuding celestial light, guiding my chosen path; As we walked in the cold your arms were fiery pillars melting my frozen fears away~ It was April when you saved me from the silver chain of peonage; You were my living hero, the hands of time that kept me going. It was April when we walked by the hazy seaside~ The night light by the harbour glimmered and faded away as I watched you drifting away with the creamy corals softly sliding to the sea. Somehow in another April morn I will wake up with your stolen gazes; Somehow in another April sky We will share a leisure walk hand in hand and I will say with a smile, " It was April when I fell in love with you". May 15, 2021 For " Say It Again Poetry Contest" Sponsored by William Kekaula 4th place Entered for "All Yours (May 16) Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand 1st place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/27/2021 11:20:00 PM
A kind of poetry where you excel and you did, well-deservingly so, congrats
Login to Reply
Date: 5/18/2021 11:20:00 AM
So beautiful and ethereal...I loved taking this journey with you. Congratulations! Susan :)
Login to Reply
Date: 5/17/2021 6:24:00 PM
Back for another round of Congrats! Blessings, Kim M
Login to Reply
Date: 5/17/2021 4:33:00 PM
Gorgeous and congratulations on your win !!
Login to Reply
Date: 5/17/2021 5:20:00 AM
Congratulations!
Login to Reply
Date: 5/16/2021 9:47:00 PM
Simply divine! Congrats JCB!
Login to Reply
Date: 5/16/2021 2:39:00 PM
Springtime is an ideal time to fall in love, what with the flowers blooming everywhere, who can resist. Thank you for sharing your pen and your soul :)
Login to Reply
Date: 5/16/2021 11:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. Have a blessed day writing away.............
Login to Reply
Date: 5/16/2021 10:35:00 AM
I see a win for this one. SO nice, and big congratulations!
Login to Reply
Date: 5/15/2021 10:25:00 PM
Congratulations!
Login to Reply
Date: 5/15/2021 7:24:00 PM
A sweet romantic write, JCB! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Login to Reply
Date: 5/15/2021 6:13:00 PM
Cupid reads ere he strums his harp strings, it is so that he knows the reason he plays is naught futile. Wondrously defining romance for what is, worthy of its deserving win my friend, Aloha!
Login to Reply
Date: 5/15/2021 8:08:00 AM
Enjoyed your emphasis on the significance of April. I started dating my love in April and we married in April as well. I'd dread to ever lose him. I like "Your eyes as deep as the ocean's bosom exuding celestial light, guiding my chosen path;"
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs