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It was a good morning until...OUCH! Oh snap! Sharp pain I suddenly felt in lower back sitting up from couch; a temporary blow dealt.... and this ain't the first time either! Back pain creeps up every now and then, though pain-killers give me a breather. I'm not alone, it nags so many men! It never stops me, though. Life goes on! Morning was rough, but hunky-dory now. Hallelujah! My vexing pain is all but gone. Thank God for Percocets! Two words: cat's meow. *true write* Submitted for... It Was A Good Morning Until.. Poetry Contest Sponsored by Tania Kitchin Date written: 02/16/2021

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Date: 2/17/2021 4:07:00 PM
Hello Edward … my sympathy indeed. Back pain cannot be seen and it’s so hard to find comfort - thank you Edward. Enjoyed your verse - Lindsay
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/18/2021 3:37:00 AM
Thank you so much for your sympathy and feedback, Lindsay:-) Have a blessed day!
Date: 2/16/2021 3:32:00 PM
You have my sympathy Edward, had a bad back on and off for years, and tackling lifting jobs I tend to forget im not 20 anymore lol. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/16/2021 7:09:00 PM
Thank you very much indeed, Tom:-) And please do take it easy when lifting!

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