It Was a Good Morning Until

It was a good morning till she arrived,
the she devil that bore her only child,
occasion to visit us she contrived,
with an excuse of sorts that she compiled!

She heaved and puffed her way in to the house,
with baggage and beddings wrapped in her arm,
she flashed a smile! that mother of my spouse,
through her big wide mouth used for gossip swarm!

It was a better morning when she left,
peace at last when I thought she would not budge,
but she died the next day! .. I wept bereft,
how prejudiced and wrong was I to judge!


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Written 13/02/2021
Sponsor Tania Kitchin
It was a good morning until.. contest
12 lines 10 syllables each.
abab cdcd efef rhyme pattern
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Andresen Avatar
February 13, 2021 at 12:53 PM
- No ugly words .... no judgment ... my mother-in-law came to us at Christmas ... she went home January 2 ... omg. ... sometimes it can be too much :)))- .... it was terribly sad that she died the next day - Best wishes in the contest, Krish :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Radhakrishna Avatar
February 13, 2021 at 1:07 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise! most love them from a distance! :)
Hankins Avatar
February 13, 2021 at 11:22 AM
Fine job writing this. I was shocked by the last stanza! Yeah, a M-I-L can start a day off on the wrong foot, but I'll bet you wish she were back. What can I say???
Radhakrishna Avatar
February 13, 2021 at 12:41 PM
Thanks! MIL can always create passions we can never predict!
Balasubramanian Avatar
February 13, 2021 at 10:22 AM
Don't show this to your wife, if you do no dinner. Fun write except second last line. Enjoyed reading. Did you join work? God bless! Take care, Rama
Radhakrishna Avatar
February 13, 2021 at 10:32 AM
Thanks Rama! not yet. Isolation for 10 days!
La France Avatar
February 13, 2021 at 8:51 AM
Krish, wonderful poem for Tania's contest, I have not decided what to write about yet, but your choice was very good _Constance
Radhakrishna Avatar
February 13, 2021 at 9:48 AM
Thanks Constance! Delighted to have your words of support!:)
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