fawn Peters Poet Rhyme

It Tickles me

It Tickles Me
By, Fawn P.
September 6th, 2026

Stars dance,
They touch and hold,
They feel, and grab,

They watch the koi fish swim,

The moon is my anchor,
As i swim in the deep,

It’s lights my only guide,
warm yet empty,
It’s grip strong yet, gentle,

Guiding my tail it propels me,

I turn to the wind,
I lean to the smell,

Dust and wax,
Tickle my nose and tongue,

When the songs are soft,
and the world is dimmed,

I lean to the world,
To guide my movements,

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Alison A Smith September 7, 2026 at 9:13 PM This is beautifully sensory and dreamlike. The gentle free-verse flow lets the images drift from stars and koi to moonlight, scent, and touch, creating an intimate underwater world that feels both comforting and lonely. I especially enjoyed the recurring sense of guidance—the moon, wind, smell, and dimmed songs all lead the speaker onward.