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It the Everyday Struggle That Make the Man

It The Everyday Struggle That Make The Man This struggle we live in,this world is or enemy and our friend we fight to see it beautiful.Have you ever heard "I've given up all hope and am ready to die to day" I'm sorry but this is more this is not some joke have you no heart have you no thought on what someone other then you have to deal with.I want to see the smiling faces of everyone that a longing dream since the day i could walk,Dreams are meant to be kept close,hearts are meant to be keep open,life is meant to be filled to the fullest.How can you say forget it and go and prepare to be put 6 feet under? I'm taking on life building up this life to see a better future for those who think they have none.Who am I to say people are crazy when I myself am crazy.Who has never been grief sicken in't human to the least.I say to those out there it is an everyday struggle that make a boy into a man and a girl into a woman,but if there is love there then this is what should be said"it is beautiful to love but to love is to know how to grieve".

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Date: 10/12/2012 4:27:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 10/9/2012 11:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your H M in my "Life These Days" (Bio Form)contest Marcedies. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/30/2012 1:54:00 AM
Well said and well written Marcedies....like your poem. - Have a lovely new week in sun and love. - oxox Anne-Lise
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