It Takes Guts

It takes guts to do what I do…
Torturing those pathetic young women…
Laughing as their eyes roll deep back in their sockets

It takes guts to do what I do…
Making them beg for their lives
Ohh how they cry and promise me anything…
Literally, anything
Stupid tramps!

It takes guts to do what I do
Watching as the life drains directly out of them
Watching the moment they just give up
Crazy tramps!

It takes guts to do what I do
Taking non-essential organs as they watch
It’s fun when the anesthesia starts wearing off…
And they see their spleen being pulled directly from their belly
Useless tramps!

It takes guts to do what I do…
….“Kevin, it’s time to put away the video games and join us for dinner…”

If only I really had the guts…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
April 4, 2012 at 11:35 PM
Well, I sure hope this stays a fantasy, Kevin. VERY clever one. Congrats on your top place.
Dailey Avatar
April 4, 2012 at 1:42 PM
great story and well deserved win. Mike
Susan Avatar
April 4, 2012 at 6:57 AM
ha ha! great play on words with 'gut' and funny twist at the end. hope you never actually have the guts to do it for real! congrats on your win! super entertaining :)
A   Avatar
April 3, 2012 at 10:02 PM
K JAMES, , Congratulations with your awesome poem, in Nathan's contest.. Have yourself a good night. :-) , luv~PD
Brown Avatar
April 3, 2012 at 11:17 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nathan's contest K. Love, Carol
Taylor Avatar
April 3, 2012 at 8:55 AM
Congrats on your 1st Place win, James. Excellent. Enjoyed. Nice going. Ralph
D. Avatar
April 3, 2012 at 8:21 AM
congrats, ;-)
Brown Avatar
December 15, 2011 at 10:58 AM
Congratulations on your super placement in Olajide's contest K. Love, Carol
A   Avatar
September 28, 2011 at 8:12 AM
Dear James, I'm here to give all my old contest winners a late congratulations. Sorry, I forgot to leave everyone a thank you *comment* of appreciation~ I hope you don't mind my copy paste congratulations.. Don't worry I have read every entry more than 3 times. lol. or how else would have I closed it with out reading. Can you accept my apology and old congrats on your poem.. Honestly I don't like my contest winners with out a quick congrats,.. thank you,..p.d. the late bloomer
Dietrich Avatar
September 24, 2011 at 10:45 PM
I seem to remember this one! Congrats, it was just as good as the first time!!
Sweetheart Avatar
September 24, 2011 at 6:10 PM
Congrats K. on a wonderful win in PD's twisted poetry contest with this dazzling delight luv..
Brown Avatar
September 24, 2011 at 5:42 PM
Congratulations on your win with your twisted poetry K. Love, Carol
Quigley Avatar
September 24, 2011 at 10:49 AM
A great message piece. Congratulations
Mehta Avatar
September 24, 2011 at 4:36 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of P.D., K.James
Ramsdale Avatar
September 3, 2011 at 4:03 AM
A Ninth Place Win Congratulations. CR
Dietrich Avatar
September 2, 2011 at 10:42 PM
what a poem. AWESOME. and it shows what is going thru the heads of some of these kids, our FUTURE right there. VEry powerful writing, and congrats in the contest. Think I'll fave this!
Alpestris Avatar
August 31, 2011 at 10:57 AM
..and the eyes go round then all crinkly with relief...enjoyed the twist there. Congrats!
Brown Avatar
August 30, 2011 at 6:12 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Nikko's "Gut Me" contest Kay_ster. Love, Carol
K. Avatar
August 30, 2011 at 5:55 PM
Haha ok this one really got me, Kay! At first I was like, “Oh wow!, This sure has some freaky lines and thoughts!” , you sure almost had me believing that this was written by a wanna be psycho (cool pseudonym btw!) and at the end I was just really relieved, haha! Really enjoyed reading this one…thanks and super congrats for this entertaining and twisted (in a good way!) write! :D
Brown Avatar
August 27, 2011 at 8:47 AM
What a wonderful start to my weekend reading your wonderful poetry. Thank you for sharing your writing Kay. Hope you are having a beautiful weekend. Love, Carol
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