It Says Nothing

Hear the Sound of my feet Walking, down the Sound of my Voice Talking                         
See the sights of the Universe, See the sights of unquenched Thirst
Smell the stagnant odor of life, Smell the rancid aroma of  Strife
Taste the unknown flavor of Death, Taste the taste of Your last Breath                              
Feel the Touch of an  unknown Love, Feel the Touch of Almighty GOD Above
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Breidenthal Avatar
January 1, 2012 at 5:22 PM
The poem allows us to use all of the five senses. WOw. Incredible one. Always, Laura
Winter Avatar
October 29, 2008 at 5:46 AM
Yes, this is quite deep and thought provoking. Hoping you are fine in every way, and reading the last line reassures me your faith will see you through. Hope you know you are always in my heart. With love, Shar
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October 28, 2008 at 6:06 PM
HGavey Daniel very deep thought provoking write! I love the last line! Laura :)
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