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It Returns In Different Form

Should it hurt?
The word "LOVE"
A gift of happiness, 
togetherness

A breath to breath combination
stomach rotation, when love is gone

Should it hurt?
Moving on!
Pulling oneself together
After falling far from heartache 

A feeling hard to bare
until another comes along

The End

Chase-

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Dineen Williams Gault

Date: 3/12/2016 6:06:00 AM

For a chance at splendor, the hurt is excruciating. Quite well expressed!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/22/2016 4:33:00 AM

Thanks for picking my poem C.T. As for your question, yes it should. Anything that means that much should encompass both ends of the continuum.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/21/2016 3:51:00 PM

thank YOU, C.T.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/29/2015 6:14:00 PM

gosh, C.T. sure do wish you would put up some new poems. And I sure appreciate how much you liked my poem!!

Skat A

Date: 12/19/2015 6:54:00 PM

CT:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups Home Page. I'm also sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year.. Good luck in all you do, just in case I don't stop a second time before the 2015 ends ~SKAT LOVE~

Skat A

Date: 12/7/2015 12:51:00 PM

WOW, that is impressive. Love in a different form, of a new love. Love SKAT

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/6/2015 7:30:00 PM

thanks for the win. glad you liked my name!

Constance La France

Date: 12/6/2015 5:33:00 PM

C.T. thanks for my placement in your Whats in your Name contest, I am very honored

Jamie Grattan

Date: 11/26/2015 10:01:00 PM

I'm all goose bumpy after reading this amazing piece u have written. My personal and current situation parallels ur words. I needed this realization and thank you so very much for sharing. J

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/22/2015 8:26:00 PM

I'm so happy you liked my poem tonight. Thanks, Chase. Sure do wish you would put up some more poems. I bet you would do some great ones!

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 9/16/2015 7:14:00 PM

As they say--love hurts. But time does mend the heart. Enjoyed this piece. love phyl

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/11/2015 12:19:00 PM

Yes at times love does hurt but life would be unbearable without it. I enjoyed your poem.

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/11/2015 10:11:00 AM

The hurt indeed, is hard to bear, until the right one comes along.(If one is lucky enough) ps....Thank you for my placement in your wine challenge. I am happy you liked my entry! :)

Constance La France

Date: 9/10/2015 8:33:00 PM

Love is both beautiful and ugly . Thanks for my placement in your wine contest, appreciate the honor ...

David Williams

Date: 8/21/2015 2:01:00 AM

Chase love comes in many guises but at some point it always hurts, whether intentional or not...good write...David

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/15/2015 1:42:00 AM

straight from the gut, chase... i churn from the blister of your aching song!.. may i know what happened to your other poems?... huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/14/2015 3:32:00 PM

I must have misunderstood your blog! I feared I could not comment to you at your poems. Sure do hope to see more poems from you, Chase!

James Marshall Goff

Date: 8/14/2015 6:42:00 AM

line 5....original, exceptional....felt every line.....wow! keep it rockin'! jimbo

Tim Smith

Date: 8/13/2015 2:51:00 PM

Love definitely hurts when we lose it. The sting stays, lingers, pierces the heart but the heart is strong and is always looking for a new love to heal itself.

David Williams

Date: 8/13/2015 11:47:00 AM

It is only unbearable if love never comes again...

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/13/2015 3:52:00 AM

When another comes along the pain is gone..That is true...though its never easy to move on.Indeed a love cycle follows our life's cycle. We are the world's fabrication.Well done!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/12/2015 8:59:00 PM

Hey, I am first to comment!! And I saw that I HAD seen your other posts, so that made me feel good! I remembered them when I saw them. The one about the bear feet and what you told me it meant. This poem is very nice. Yes, the feeling is hard to bear. But thank heavens, new love comes along!!