C T Poet Verse

It Returns In Different Form

Should it hurt?
The word "LOVE"
A gift of happiness, 
togetherness

A breath to breath combination
stomach rotation, when love is gone

Should it hurt?
Moving on!
Pulling oneself together
After falling far from heartache 

A feeling hard to bare
until another comes along

The End

Chase-

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Dineen Williams Gault March 12, 2016 at 6:06 AM For a chance at splendor, the hurt is excruciating. Quite well expressed!

Richard Lamoureux January 22, 2016 at 4:33 AM Thanks for picking my poem C.T. As for your question, yes it should. Anything that means that much should encompass both ends of the continuum.

Andrea Dietrich January 21, 2016 at 3:51 PM thank YOU, C.T.

Andrea Dietrich December 29, 2015 at 6:14 PM gosh, C.T. sure do wish you would put up some new poems. And I sure appreciate how much you liked my poem!!

Skat A December 19, 2015 at 6:54 PM CT:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups Home Page. I'm also sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year.. Good luck in all you do, just in case I don't stop a second time before the 2015 ends ~SKAT LOVE~

Skat A December 7, 2015 at 12:51 PM WOW, that is impressive. Love in a different form, of a new love. Love SKAT

Andrea Dietrich December 6, 2015 at 7:30 PM thanks for the win. glad you liked my name!

Constance La France December 6, 2015 at 5:33 PM C.T. thanks for my placement in your Whats in your Name contest, I am very honored

Jamie Grattan November 26, 2015 at 10:01 PM I'm all goose bumpy after reading this amazing piece u have written. My personal and current situation parallels ur words. I needed this realization and thank you so very much for sharing. J

Andrea Dietrich October 22, 2015 at 8:26 PM I'm so happy you liked my poem tonight. Thanks, Chase. Sure do wish you would put up some more poems. I bet you would do some great ones!

Phyllis Babcock September 16, 2015 at 7:14 PM As they say--love hurts. But time does mend the heart. Enjoyed this piece. love phyl

Richard Lamoureux September 11, 2015 at 12:19 PM Yes at times love does hurt but life would be unbearable without it. I enjoyed your poem.

Carrie Richards September 11, 2015 at 10:11 AM The hurt indeed, is hard to bear, until the right one comes along.(If one is lucky enough) ps....Thank you for my placement in your wine challenge. I am happy you liked my entry! :)

Constance La France September 10, 2015 at 8:33 PM Love is both beautiful and ugly . Thanks for my placement in your wine contest, appreciate the honor ...

David Williams August 21, 2015 at 2:01 AM Chase love comes in many guises but at some point it always hurts, whether intentional or not...good write...David

Nette Onclaud August 15, 2015 at 1:42 AM straight from the gut, chase... i churn from the blister of your aching song!.. may i know what happened to your other poems?... huggs

Andrea Dietrich August 14, 2015 at 3:32 PM I must have misunderstood your blog! I feared I could not comment to you at your poems. Sure do hope to see more poems from you, Chase!

James Marshall Goff August 14, 2015 at 6:42 AM line 5....original, exceptional....felt every line.....wow! keep it rockin'! jimbo

Tim Smith August 13, 2015 at 2:51 PM Love definitely hurts when we lose it. The sting stays, lingers, pierces the heart but the heart is strong and is always looking for a new love to heal itself.

David Williams August 13, 2015 at 11:47 AM It is only unbearable if love never comes again...

Charmaine Chircop August 13, 2015 at 3:52 AM When another comes along the pain is gone..That is true...though its never easy to move on.Indeed a love cycle follows our life's cycle. We are the world's fabrication.Well done!

Andrea Dietrich August 12, 2015 at 8:59 PM Hey, I am first to comment!! And I saw that I HAD seen your other posts, so that made me feel good! I remembered them when I saw them. The one about the bear feet and what you told me it meant. This poem is very nice. Yes, the feeling is hard to bear. But thank heavens, new love comes along!! Arthur Vaso November 20, 2015 at 1:06 AM He was the first to comment on mine too! Then he ran away, jealous trolls everywhere these days.