Michael J. Falotico Poet Rhyme

It Only Fades

How to let go,when your all I know...
How to walk away,when you were my day...
How long does it take to heal from this pain...
How long do I walk in tears of rain...
Time doesn't heal the hurt I felt that day...
It just stretches it out till it finally fades...


written today based on a past love...
for "Letting Go" contest
Michael J Falotico

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Carol Sunshine Brown June 6, 2012 at 8:29 AM When I click on one of your poems I know it will be Truly amazing MJF . Thank you for sharing your words with us. I hope all is well with you and yours. I will stop back again soon. Love, Carol

Diana Mohammed April 29, 2012 at 8:43 PM I guess it does...Love Diana

Michael Smith April 29, 2012 at 4:37 PM Beautifully worded sentiments. I'd be stunned if this wasn't a winning piece. Please read my poem Letting Go. I wrote before the contest.

Dinda Minardi April 3, 2012 at 8:44 AM Too much painful that can only eased by time.. A really heartfelt writing everyone can relate.. quite sad, Michael :(

Wilma Neels April 1, 2012 at 1:50 PM I just love the title and so many of us can identify with this feeling Michael, it is great if you can write about these past hurts and at the end you feel, I've grown from that. I get the feeling when I read this one. All the best for the contest, love Wilma

Joyce Johnson March 31, 2012 at 4:03 PM You certainly have caught the feeling of rejection and letting go. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for your kind words aout my poem "Rescued". I had to hurry to get under the wire. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 31, 2012 at 1:30 PM oh my heart is aching and breaking feeling your emotion in these lines Michael luv.. so dramatically written luv with lasting impressions.. good luck in contest.. ,maybel my Traveling in Timeless Sequence will cheer u up a bit.. after all it has hints of u in it.. JG in brazen mode ..zozo..