It Never Was

I MUST HAVE BEEN BLIND NOT TO SEE

THE HEADLIGHTS UP AHEAD OF HOW IT WAS TO BE

TALL,DARK AND HANDSOME YOU WOULD AGREE

BUT ALL HE WAS, IS NOW A DREAM TO ME

BACK THEN, IT WAS YOUR LOVE THAT SET ME FREE

WHEN I THINK OF IT TODAY, I JUST COUNT TO THREE

AND ALL THOSE THOUGHTS AND EMOTIONS JUST FLEE

WHATS LEFT IN MY WORLD IS MY OWN REALITY


IT TOOK A WHILE TO SOOTHE  THE HURT, BUT I CAN GUARANTEE

IT DID WORK! THANKS TO REVENGE, YES THAT WAS THE KEY 
(WHY IS THIS FEELING SUCH A MYSTERY?)

NO MORE WILL I RESPOND TO THE SMOOTHE STARE I FANCY

WHICH ALWAYS CAUSED A WOBBLE AT MY KNEE

BECAUSE NOW,  I’M A STRONGER LADY.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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June 2, 2016 at 1:19 AM
Stopping by to say hello:) *SKAT
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October 15, 2013 at 6:46 PM
Well penned my dear friend. A warm welcome to you, I hope you find poetrysoup a safe haven for display of your talents. Here everyone is a friend to one another. Love and hugs.
Davis Avatar
October 9, 2013 at 9:08 AM
This is a powerful and deep write The reader is taken on a roller coaster of emotion and feeling. Full of heart and soul nice job
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October 8, 2013 at 7:16 PM
Fiona, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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October 8, 2013 at 5:22 AM
Welcome to P-Soup, Fiona ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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October 8, 2013 at 12:54 AM
a powerful thoughtful poem, Fiona, I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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