P.S. Awtry Poet Triolet

It Never Fails

The sun will rise.  The sun will set.

Though we may doubt so many things,

the sun has never failed us yet.

The sun will rise.  The sun will set.

Against the sun I would not bet.

Regardless what the morrow brings,

the sun will rise--the sun will set.

The sun has never failed us yet.





February 18, 2019

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Caren Krutsinger March 15, 2019 at 12:51 AM You have mastered the triolet, Maestro! P.S. Awtry March 15, 2019 at 1:03 AM Thank you dear Caren :)

Khurram Khan March 8, 2019 at 12:36 PM Very nice , I like it.Good work P.S. Awtry March 9, 2019 at 6:16 AM Thank you, Khurram! ~ps

Michael Wise March 5, 2019 at 11:54 AM Love it. I love the positive vibe in this. :) P.S. Awtry March 5, 2019 at 12:41 PM Thank you Michael :) -ps

Timothy Mcguire February 22, 2019 at 3:39 PM back with congrats P.S. Awtry February 22, 2019 at 6:46 PM Thank you :). -ps

Andrea Dietrich February 21, 2019 at 8:23 PM let' s hope it never Does fail us. Very lovely triolet. Congrats! P.S. Awtry February 21, 2019 at 9:44 PM Thank you, Andrea -ps

Janis Medders Tobechi February 21, 2019 at 12:12 PM You cannot argue with this. Truth is universal. Congratulations. P.S. Awtry February 21, 2019 at 12:21 PM Thank you Janis :).

Gary Smith February 21, 2019 at 6:51 AM Flows beautifully P.S. much enjoyed. :) P.S. Awtry February 21, 2019 at 7:25 AM Thank you very much Gary ~ ps

Wren Rushing February 20, 2019 at 2:48 PM This is a beautiful poem filled with truth. It reminds me we always have a reference point to begin each day! A fav for me! P.S. Awtry February 20, 2019 at 2:50 PM Thank you so much dear Wren for the generous compliment and the FAV :)

Jennifer Proxenos February 20, 2019 at 9:04 AM I am not familiar with this form of poetry PSA but it is impressive and its repetitiveness I love - well penned, beautiful. Poetry hugs, Jennifer. P.S. Awtry February 20, 2019 at 9:25 AM This was my first attempt. One of our very new members, Sherilyn Kucharek has been experimenting with them and inspired me to write this one. ~ PS

Andrew Fairchild February 19, 2019 at 8:51 PM This is really a good one! Well, they're all really good! Anyway, I am reminded of a saying from the Talmud, paraphrased. 'The Sun shall rise without my assistance.' Sure puts things in perspective, doesn't it? Glad to see your new stuff! P.S. Awtry February 19, 2019 at 9:03 PM Thank you Andrew. Yes that does put things in perspective!

Constance La France February 19, 2019 at 3:50 PM PS, a lovely Triolet, yes its true no matter what the sun rises and sets ~ P.S. Awtry February 19, 2019 at 4:25 PM Thank you Dear Heart! This was a failed villanelle I thought I’d recycle...

Swetha Vangaveti February 19, 2019 at 4:51 AM Wonderfully written. Loved it :) P.S. Awtry February 19, 2019 at 6:09 AM Thank you! :)

Sherilynn Kucharek February 19, 2019 at 12:51 AM This is so good! I love it! You are a poet, and didn't even know it! Haha It's fun right? You're addicted already, I can tell! Have fun, looking forward to more! Hugs! P.S. Awtry February 19, 2019 at 12:53 AM Your enthusiasm is infectious! You are a hoot! Thank you for your delightful visit!

Timothy Mcguire February 18, 2019 at 10:35 PM Reminds me of the Fiddler on the Roof song. I like this one. P.S. Awtry February 18, 2019 at 10:38 PM Thank you. I am glad and I am going to find that song ... it has been a while...but, I so loved the movie version (only version I've seen).

Line Gauthier February 18, 2019 at 10:07 PM Bravo, PS. Beautiful triolet. P.S. Awtry February 18, 2019 at 10:09 PM Thank you Line! I can not begin to say how much I appreciate you! <3