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It Left Her In a Tizzy

There was a young lady I knew Who sat there looking so blue Her hair was all frizzy It left her in a tizzy Cause this fellow just wanted to... uh... talk! © Jack Ellison 2013

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Waltraud I. Mack

Date: 11/22/2013 5:55:00 PM

Just a bad hair day, we women have them occasionally. So it was just talk. Thank you for a good laugh, great write...

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/22/2013 7:13:00 PM

Happy it gave you a chuckle my friend... big hugs, Jack xox

Donna Jones

Date: 11/18/2013 8:54:00 AM

OK jack....pass over one of those depends...when you're gonna do this to me...too much morning coffee...:-) :-) :-) :-) a good laugh this morning!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/18/2013 8:59:00 AM

LOL We have a whole bathroom cabinet full of those things! Enjoy your coffee... I'm up to 2 or 3 now! Love and cuddly hugs, Jake xoxoxox

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/18/2013 6:47:00 AM

I like what Sarai said below...bring some Santa cheer (she said wisdom but I'm saying cheer) my friend, to all of us needy people, ha ha! This is a enormously wonderful write my friend! I really loved reading this lovely Limerick this morning! What a phenomenal piece, Great Work!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/18/2013 7:29:00 AM

Hohoho! Santa here spreading wisdom AND cheer! LOL

Sarai Virden

Date: 11/17/2013 9:30:00 PM

Nice sweetie. Do you take requests? Holiday season upon us, spread the wisdom Santa Jack haha lol Big hugs xoxox

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/18/2013 7:27:00 AM

Come sit on Santa's knee (hehe) little girl!!! LOL Santa can be quite naughty at times... jolly big hugs my dear Sarai! xoxoxox

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 11/17/2013 5:49:00 PM

What does she want, Jack? Ha. Anyway, have a great coming week :).

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/17/2013 6:19:00 PM

LOL Haven't heard from for a while! Missed you dear friend... big hugs xox

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 11/17/2013 2:39:00 PM

Super cool rhyming! Fun adorable poem. Nice to read u again.

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/17/2013 2:55:00 PM

Many thanks my dear friend!!! Come back again...

Carol Eastman

Date: 11/17/2013 10:29:00 AM

She ought to meet my Troll with the blue ribbon hair... His wife... a witch... could defrizz her hair in a jiffy... Or she could meet de Dragon... Moisture tends to leave the air around him... And fright straightens hair rather well too... But the singed hair look is out this season... so I suggest the Troll and his witch... LOL

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/17/2013 10:59:00 AM

Does your mind ever stop!!! YIKES! Love from Canada xoxox