It Left Her In a Tizzy

There was a young lady I knew Who sat there looking so blue Her hair was all frizzy It left her in a tizzy Cause this fellow just wanted to... uh... talk! © Jack Ellison 2013
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Mack Avatar
November 22, 2013 at 5:55 PM
Just a bad hair day, we women have them occasionally. So it was just talk. Thank you for a good laugh, great write...
Ellison Avatar
November 22, 2013 at 7:13 PM
Happy it gave you a chuckle my friend... big hugs, Jack xox
Jones Avatar
November 18, 2013 at 8:54 AM
OK jack....pass over one of those depends...when you're gonna do this to me...too much morning coffee...:-) :-) :-) :-) a good laugh this morning!!
Ellison Avatar
November 18, 2013 at 8:59 AM
LOL We have a whole bathroom cabinet full of those things! Enjoy your coffee... I'm up to 2 or 3 now! Love and cuddly hugs, Jake xoxoxox
Sivey Avatar
November 18, 2013 at 6:47 AM
I like what Sarai said below...bring some Santa cheer (she said wisdom but I'm saying cheer) my friend, to all of us needy people, ha ha! This is a enormously wonderful write my friend! I really loved reading this lovely Limerick this morning! What a phenomenal piece, Great Work!!
Ellison Avatar
November 18, 2013 at 7:29 AM
Hohoho! Santa here spreading wisdom AND cheer! LOL
Virden Avatar
November 17, 2013 at 9:30 PM
Nice sweetie. Do you take requests? Holiday season upon us, spread the wisdom Santa Jack haha lol Big hugs xoxox
Ellison Avatar
November 18, 2013 at 7:27 AM
Come sit on Santa's knee (hehe) little girl!!! LOL Santa can be quite naughty at times... jolly big hugs my dear Sarai! xoxoxox
Harrell Avatar
November 17, 2013 at 5:49 PM
What does she want, Jack? Ha. Anyway, have a great coming week :).
Ellison Avatar
November 17, 2013 at 6:19 PM
LOL Haven't heard from for a while! Missed you dear friend... big hugs xox
Kamoonpuri Avatar
November 17, 2013 at 2:39 PM
Super cool rhyming! Fun adorable poem. Nice to read u again.
Ellison Avatar
November 17, 2013 at 2:55 PM
Many thanks my dear friend!!! Come back again...
Eastman Avatar
November 17, 2013 at 10:29 AM
She ought to meet my Troll with the blue ribbon hair... His wife... a witch... could defrizz her hair in a jiffy... Or she could meet de Dragon... Moisture tends to leave the air around him... And fright straightens hair rather well too... But the singed hair look is out this season... so I suggest the Troll and his witch... LOL
Ellison Avatar
November 17, 2013 at 10:59 AM
Does your mind ever stop!!! YIKES! Love from Canada xoxox
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