It Jars My Memory

Ever had a problem you need to solve
to find the solution is your resolve

The pieces just will not fall into place
a jigsaw puzzle without any face
 
When you go to bed, it’s still on your mind
you toss and you turn for a long-long time

Finally your brain drifts into slumber
how your subconscious works is a wonder?

In jars your memory, looks at each option
finds a solution for your adoption

You’re jarred awake with the problem resolved
and have no idea how the solution evolved

January 21 2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 30, 2012 at 3:28 AM
Congratulations Charles, like this x
Brown Avatar
January 29, 2012 at 10:54 AM
Congratulations on your win in Susan's "JARS" contest Charles. Love, Carol
Pettit Avatar
January 29, 2012 at 12:18 AM
Congratulations on winning with this fine entry. Sometimes, we are lucky enough to stumble upon the solution to a problem.
Dietrich Avatar
January 28, 2012 at 7:26 PM
what a wonderful way to work in the word Jar, as a VERB. LOVE that. Congratulations on your win, Charles.
Williams Avatar
January 28, 2012 at 12:50 PM
Charles congrats on your win..David
Sweetheart Avatar
January 28, 2012 at 12:21 PM
congrats Charles on a wonderful win for jars theme .. luv..
Quigley Avatar
January 28, 2012 at 12:18 PM
Love the rhyme and meter of this one Charles. Congratulations.
Northeast Avatar
January 21, 2012 at 9:30 PM
Very well done Charles, Bren : )
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