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It Is Coming

It Is Coming It is coming - I can feel the changes, subtle changes, in the pressure on the surface, unseen but noticeable to those who have ridden these seas before. Rising swells that slap the hull in gauntlet sting, deep creak of old familiar spars bracing, once again, to ride the coming maelstrom far out at sea, alone in howling wind blown troughs, surrounded by the white tipped fingers of a crushing hand, no escape. Frail vessel knowing only that the sea has not yet won, responds to faint commands of trembling hands that sail these fickle seas – alone. 12/12/12 submitted to –Your Favourite Old Poem #3 sponsor – Shadow Hamilton

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Date: 6/30/2015 6:48:00 PM
John, Congratulations on your old favorite poem. Always ~LINDA~
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John Lawless
Date: 6/30/2015 7:41:00 PM
As always Linda, thank you for your continuing support.
Date: 6/29/2015 6:50:00 AM
Enjoyed this one John. A well constructed verse vividly portraying man vs. The sea. Congrats
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John Lawless
Date: 6/30/2015 7:40:00 PM
Thanks Mark for stopping by to read and comment.
Date: 6/28/2015 9:52:00 AM
Man against the sea, a tale as old as time. Yu told it well with such few words. Congratulations.
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John Lawless
Date: 6/30/2015 7:40:00 PM
Thanks Richard, it is more of a metaphorical reference to the ups and downs of life.
Date: 6/28/2015 12:52:00 AM
John, Congrats on your win......Love SKAT
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John Lawless
Date: 6/28/2015 6:37:00 AM
Thanks again SKAT....
Date: 6/27/2015 5:20:00 AM
very descriptive write of a small yacht caught in tumorous seas John Congrats on placing hugs
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John Lawless
Date: 6/28/2015 6:37:00 AM
Thanks Shadow, appreciate your time and effort on these contests.
Date: 6/26/2015 11:36:00 AM
Wow...what a descriptive write. Actual or metaphorical, it has great imagery. Have you gone sailing alone John? They say men has a craving for this. A 7. Goodluck with the contest.
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John Lawless
Date: 6/28/2015 6:35:00 AM
Kim, thanks for the high mark and for stopping by to read this poem. Never gone sailing but have had some "interesting" moments in canoes and kayaks, and small bass boats.
Date: 6/26/2015 8:03:00 AM
beautifully written, awesome metaphors... Great job, Thank you for sharing with me... Tanya
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