It Is a Lovely Day

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Placed 2nd in Eve Roper's Nursery Rhyme Contest, August 27, 2024

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Today Lil wears a flowered dress, a big straw hat, and comfy shoes while watering Mom’s many blooms the big and small, the pinks and blues. Her golden dog and tabby cat relax and calmly watch their friend. What could be better for a girl than having flowers to attend? The front yard is a wonderland with things for little girls to do and loving pets that wait nearby. Life bears a happy, rosy hue. picture 4

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Terry Miller

Date: 8/28/2024 6:29:00 AM

very sweet, congratulations

Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/30/2024 10:52:00 AM

Thanks so much, Terry. Janice

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/25/2024 6:12:00 AM

Ahhh!! Lovely picture and such a nice poem to describe what you are feeling and seeing in that art. Reads like a good contender for a contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K

Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/26/2024 2:17:00 PM

Sara, thanks SO much for this encouraging response! Janice

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/23/2024 4:03:00 AM

You captured the scene well Janice, good luck in the contest and hope you have a lovely weekend. Tom

Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/26/2024 2:16:00 PM

Thanks so much, Tom. I fear it sounds nothing like the nursery rhyme-style poem the prompt asks for! Janice

Tom Woody

Date: 8/21/2024 11:25:00 AM

Ever so loverly

Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/21/2024 8:46:00 PM

Thanks so much, Tom. It's supposed to be like a nursery rhyme. I must say it's not like any nursery rhyme I've ever read! LOL! Janice