It Hurts

Girl it hurts that I will one time brake up with you
And you will love another man too
You will give him that smile
The one you gave me every while
Your love will flow like the Nile
with him you will go an extra mile.

He will touch
He will smooch
give him that look u gave me
whenever I made sweet love to thee.

He will walk you
To the park just you two
He will hold your hands
Like we did hold hands
when your hands contact
you will give him that cool eye contact
like you did to me.

It hurts that all this will happen
But I'm not asking you back its not gonna happen
You decided to leave
for you strongly believe
we were not meant to be
You might be wrong baby
For what we had all along
was never at all wrong.

yes my heart is fragile and broken
for my love for you is never mistaken
you said i will not see you again
i am in pain
going insane
to lose this love
i will never have.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 11/19/2014 10:35:00 AM
Excellent poem! Very sad poem Griffins . One can feel all these emotions. A 7 for me! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.
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Date: 11/19/2014 7:13:00 AM
It hurt the readers too.An innovative one.Thanks for sharing.Regards.-Safa
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