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It Hurts

It hurts to breath, It hurts to be, inside this form, where no one see how much i cry. They ask me why? But i have no reply. I can hurt as much i want, I can fix my hurt with my scars, But no one can fix the scars on my heart. For only i can fix my scars

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Letty Shoemaker

Date: 12/15/2008 12:26:00 AM

This was expressed so well! Very moving! Very touching! Excellent!

Lisa Cooper

Date: 12/11/2008 6:15:00 PM

great pen, I can relate. God bless.

Breana Wiggins

Date: 12/10/2008 11:56:00 AM

I can relate. Nice poem. *Breana*

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 12/10/2008 11:18:00 AM

Riveting self-analysis... wanna hug? ('breathe' for 'breath' in line 1) I imagine it made you feel better to get this out... God bless, Keith

John Loving Iii

Date: 12/8/2008 2:39:00 PM

life is filled with hurt. like running out of time. john

John Heck

Date: 12/7/2008 7:20:00 AM

A very sad and haunting poem. I always believe that time heals everything - both scars and hurt - but most importantly, believe in yourself and your talent. Wishing you the best and have a Happy holiday season. Peace always, John

Robin L. Gass

Date: 12/7/2008 5:58:00 AM

This is great. Very deep and touching. I know from experience how difficult it is to hurt so bad and to feel alone and lost in that hurt. It helps me to write about and I hope that it helps you too. I also hope Justin is doing well. Keep writing, Sammy. Love Robin

Amy Swanson

Date: 12/6/2008 8:50:00 AM

Beautifully written Samantha, and also sad - I felt like crying along with you. I just posted one a bit ago, "Beside You," it is kind of a love poem but written from God's point of view, you are welcome to read it, if you would like. I loved reading your poetry, look forward to reading more of your work. :) God bless, Amy

Laurie Ginn

Date: 12/5/2008 8:12:00 PM

Okay I agree as well so now you're out numbered. God has amazing healing power. He can even turn our sadness to gladness. It too much for us to do. That's why he's there Samantha. Hope your friend is well. In Christ, Laurie

Christy Hardy

Date: 12/5/2008 7:06:00 PM

Michaela has the answer, only God can fix the hurt inside our hearts, and He can erase the scars left behind...this write is so sad, Blessings, Christy

John Rhinem

Date: 12/5/2008 7:05:00 PM

Well, there is a lot of truth unto this "Dear Precious Young Samantha Watts!"~Yet, a good network, of brightened and good friends, also is a great asset unto these heartful hopes and longings!:) So, surround yourself with beautiful colors dear~and watch your beauties unfold!~"Love & Warmth To All You Love, John!"~"Nice Write Dear Young Lady~Bye!:)

Michaela Payne

Date: 12/5/2008 6:17:00 PM

So sad, and so deep. God can fix the scars on your heart if you let him. wonderful write my friend. ~Michaela~