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It Haunts Me

A mirage of deathly shadow grates my mind… flinging me out beyond a holed nightscape; it traps my existence on chains of insanity as footsteps race against a tortuous wind drumming, banging, yelling old sins; and how it laughs as if to rake my bones into pieces... NO, is there a way out from this purgatory, this meshed labyrinth? A surreal whip drives me between zones of hysteria and coherence: Yet, it haunts all imaginings.. a slide-show zooming in, out a ravine’s edge to rows where bloodied vines climb inside walls of my head… Gasping for breath, I wake in the dead of twilight: a nightmare’s pursuit lynching my sleep again, again...and again. For john lawless' IT contest 12/10/2017

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Date: 12/15/2017 8:54:00 PM
Wow! You could not have been any more vivid with word. Excellent!
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Date: 12/13/2017 12:46:00 PM
Congrats on your win, may all your nightmares be put to rest.
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Date: 12/13/2017 12:20:00 PM
Very deep and dark write no wonder why "it" haunts you, congrats on your top spot
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Date: 12/13/2017 11:50:00 AM
Awesome write, deep scary congratulations on your win hugs Eve
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Date: 12/13/2017 11:29:00 AM
Back for congrats, Nette, on your top win!!
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Date: 12/13/2017 11:21:00 AM
Nette, this one haunted me...loaded with vivid, descriptive, imager and the ambiguity of the ever present "IT". Thanks for entering the contest.
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Date: 12/10/2017 10:40:00 AM
This is dark and deep... i would hate being lost in such a labrynth... great write Nette...
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Date: 12/10/2017 2:04:00 AM
Excellent. Well described write. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 12/9/2017 10:07:00 PM
Very deep and haunting my friend...just the way I like it... well-crafted nette...god bless and happy holidays...^WW^
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Date: 12/9/2017 8:07:00 PM
Labyrinths...one of my favorite pastimes! the delusion of allusion...frenzied images...nicely done, poetiss!
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Date: 12/9/2017 1:25:00 PM
A mind, not at peace. Great write!
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Date: 12/9/2017 1:16:00 PM
This is great nette...I picture waking from that nightmare
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Date: 12/9/2017 11:50:00 AM
You described the haunting "it" well--the power within will smash it soon--best for a win, nette.
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