It Haunts Me

A mirage of deathly shadow grates my mind… flinging me out beyond a holed nightscape; it traps my existence on chains of insanity as footsteps race against a tortuous wind drumming, banging, yelling old sins; and how it laughs as if to rake my bones into pieces... NO, is there a way out from this purgatory, this meshed labyrinth? A surreal whip drives me between zones of hysteria and coherence: Yet, it haunts all imaginings.. a slide-show zooming in, out a ravine’s edge to rows where bloodied vines climb inside walls of my head… Gasping for breath, I wake in the dead of twilight: a nightmare’s pursuit lynching my sleep again, again...and again. For john lawless' IT contest 12/10/2017
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Thomas Avatar
December 15, 2017 at 8:54 PM
Wow! You could not have been any more vivid with word. Excellent!
Babbit Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 12:46 PM
Congrats on your win, may all your nightmares be put to rest.
Davey Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 12:20 PM
Very deep and dark write no wonder why "it" haunts you, congrats on your top spot
Roper Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 11:50 AM
Awesome write, deep scary congratulations on your win hugs Eve
Rodrigues Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 11:29 AM
Back for congrats, Nette, on your top win!!
Lawless Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 11:21 AM
Nette, this one haunted me...loaded with vivid, descriptive, imager and the ambiguity of the ever present "IT". Thanks for entering the contest.
One Avatar
December 10, 2017 at 10:40 AM
This is dark and deep... i would hate being lost in such a labrynth... great write Nette...
Sathasivam Avatar
December 10, 2017 at 2:04 AM
Excellent. Well described write. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.
Warrior Avatar
December 9, 2017 at 10:07 PM
Very deep and haunting my friend...just the way I like it... well-crafted nette...god bless and happy holidays...^WW^
Goff Avatar
December 9, 2017 at 8:07 PM
Labyrinths...one of my favorite pastimes! the delusion of allusion...frenzied images...nicely done, poetiss!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 9, 2017 at 1:25 PM
A mind, not at peace. Great write!
Smith Avatar
December 9, 2017 at 1:16 PM
This is great nette...I picture waking from that nightmare
Pandit Avatar
December 9, 2017 at 11:50 AM
You described the haunting "it" well--the power within will smash it soon--best for a win, nette.
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