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It Happened On a Rainy Night

"Foggy mists engulfed the bright When raindrops fell throughout the night The lampposts glowed at midnights dark When sweethearts kissed at Lover's Park" When lightning streaked, she tightly embraced, As she squeezed water from her hair's sweet grace, She left me stunned, struck by Cupid's fiery arrow, Pined for, we met in love's perfect marrow.

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Date: 9/7/2023 8:43:00 AM
Nicely done. We both used hair in that second stqnza!
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Date: 9/7/2023 7:44:00 AM
I love your rhymes, they are so creative and well articulated for the theme of this poem, and your words are fitting. I especially loved “ struck by cupids fiery arrow” lightning and how it created a passionate ambience so poetically youve depicted. Brilliant. Goodluck in the competition
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Date: 9/6/2023 9:22:00 PM
Beautiful collaboration . Lightning and the strike of Cupid's arrow. Love it. All the Best !
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