Lin Lane Poet Rhyme

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It happened on a rainy night-collaboration contest 

sponsored by Charlie Messina~8/5/23

It Happened On a Rainy Night

Foggy mists engulfed the bright
When raindrops fell throughout the night
The lampposts glowed at midnight’s dark
When sweethearts kissed at Lover’s Park. 

Their lips gently touched, love professed
With each other, they were obsessed
Strolling in the park, hand in hand
Fervid kisses seared like a brand

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Paula Goldsmith September 7, 2023 at 8:08 AM A lovely write. "Good Luck" Have a great day........................ Lin Lane September 7, 2023 at 8:24 AM Thank you very much, Paula.

Terry Flood September 6, 2023 at 3:37 PM A nice steamy addition, Lin. Terry Lin Lane September 7, 2023 at 8:24 AM Thanks an awful lot, Terry.

Jay Narain September 6, 2023 at 10:14 AM Passionate addendum to a nice poem, Good job Lin, Lin Lane September 7, 2023 at 8:24 AM Thanks so much, Jay.

Robert Lindley September 6, 2023 at 6:09 AM I knew you my good friend would present a very, very fine four verses. Yes, this goes right in so smoothly. God bless you. Lin Lane September 7, 2023 at 8:23 AM Thanks for your on-going support, Robert.

Yann Rolland September 5, 2023 at 3:19 PM love and passion, "even in the park", this is delightful Lin Lane September 7, 2023 at 8:23 AM Thank you very much, yann.