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It happened on a rainy night-collaboration contest 

sponsored by Charlie Messina~8/5/23

Foggy mists engulfed the bright When raindrops fell throughout the night The lampposts glowed at midnight’s dark When sweethearts kissed at Lover’s Park. Their lips gently touched, love professed With each other, they were obsessed Strolling in the park, hand in hand Fervid kisses seared like a brand

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Date: 9/7/2023 8:08:00 AM
A lovely write. "Good Luck" Have a great day........................
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Lin Lane
Date: 9/7/2023 8:24:00 AM
Thank you very much, Paula.
Date: 9/6/2023 3:37:00 PM
A nice steamy addition, Lin. Terry
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Lin Lane
Date: 9/7/2023 8:24:00 AM
Thanks an awful lot, Terry.
Date: 9/6/2023 10:14:00 AM
Passionate addendum to a nice poem, Good job Lin,
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Lin Lane
Date: 9/7/2023 8:24:00 AM
Thanks so much, Jay.
Date: 9/6/2023 6:09:00 AM
I knew you my good friend would present a very, very fine four verses. Yes, this goes right in so smoothly. God bless you.
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Lin Lane
Date: 9/7/2023 8:23:00 AM
Thanks for your on-going support, Robert.
Date: 9/5/2023 3:19:00 PM
love and passion, "even in the park", this is delightful
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Lin Lane
Date: 9/7/2023 8:23:00 AM
Thank you very much, yann.

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