It Happened On a Rainy Night

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"Foggy mists engulfed the bright When raindrops fell throughout the night The lampposts glowed at midnights dark When sweethearts kissed at Lover's Park" As crickets sang their lovers' song Under the umbrella, you held me long. Your strong arms around my waist. Walking home, after our foretaste.

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/5/2023 11:44:00 AM

Just lovely, and oh so tender, Sara! I especially love the picture of lovers who have celebrated many anniversaries! There is a romantic daintiness in your words like a fine mist! Best wishes for the contest! Blessings!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/5/2023 12:17:00 PM

Why, thank you, Sam. I need all the blessings I can get. I appreciate the visit to my page. Sara

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/2/2023 10:30:00 PM

Wow, this is such a beautiful poem hued with the fragrance of love and petrichor.. So saccharine and wonderful! I'm in awe of the delicate descriptions here, so emotive and heartfelt.. Yet it holds a sweet magical ambience.. The elegant word-weaving here has captivated my soul! :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/3/2023 4:11:00 AM

Why, thank you, Hiya. Your visit is uplifting. Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/2/2023 7:35:00 AM

Sara, I must express my deep appreciation for the overwhelming emotions that your words have evoked. The way you have intricately woven together a tapestry of love and affection in your writing is truly captivating. Your second stanza, in particular, is a breathtaking masterpiece that seamlessly harmonizes with the enchanting essence of the first.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/2/2023 8:58:00 AM

Thank you, Lasaad. Now that I have reassured me it is good, who knows what will happen. Sara

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/2/2023 5:13:00 AM

Beautifully romantic second stanza you write, Sara---that superbly complements the first.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/2/2023 6:17:00 AM

Why, thank you, Vijay. I appreciate the nice review of my work. Sara