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It Happened On a Misty Morning

"Wettened by the morning dew Closely spaced where rows of roses grew Footprints stained the cobblestone Where my love and I had walked, alone" We retraced those steps again Melded hearts singing passion refrain Where the scent of roses swirl We strolled with our little boy and girl

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Beryl Edmonds

Date: 10/11/2023 6:58:00 PM

That’s lovely Joanna, sure to see this on the completed collaboration… Belle

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/28/2023 2:48:00 PM

Oh wow. This would make a great ending to the collab.

Silent One

Date: 9/27/2023 12:44:00 PM

A lovely response my friend..

Valsa George

Date: 9/27/2023 9:10:00 AM

As DD has commented, you have taken a deviation frim the trodden path. The time lapsed silent and the lovers became parents. Visiting the old place where they rambled free as lovers is a pleasurable rxperience. Great entry Joanna. All the Best.

Di11y Da11y

Date: 9/27/2023 3:34:00 AM

Aww that's so cute! It's always a challenge to write something different than the other entrants for these and this is a winner (if they stay together of course! I don't know how the poem will play out) best of luck in the contest x