It hangs there

It hangs there
Suspended
A wave
Waiting to break
Surge
Upon the beach
Play
In the sand
Giggle
In its foam froth
Whisper
To the rolling stones
Exit
Chasing a fading
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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October 5, 2025 at 5:20 PM
oh, wow...how unique your structure is...made your poem a compelling read. Well penned, sir.
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