It Feels Right

It Feels Right

Come here, let me talk to you!
I know you got a man but
let me show you something true!

I love your sassy attitude!
The way you strut confidently
yet so humble and subdued

I'll caress your face!
Have you doing things you shouldn't,
alone in my place.

I'll bite your lower lip!
Hand prints on that ass
as I tease you with the tip.

Love music to match,
I'll hit your hot spots
watch you giggle and laugh.

I will treat you right,
Engaged in the chase
for more than just tonight.

Always keep you lookin' good!
Prince of your temple
you can call me robin hood.

I'll shower you with love!
Mulberry bubble bath
your body fits me like a glove!

I've got your body so relaxed!
Sexy moans serenade and
I'm becoming more attached!

Oh, what you like it rough!
I'll take you to the pinnacle
have you screaming that's enough!

Tell me about your past!
I want to get to know you,
put your heart on blast.

Intoxicated, you taste like Moet!
Scratch marks on my back, 
dug deeper the further I get!

You've got me stronger than bamboo!
sweat soaked and falling hard
into a situation so taboo!


Jared L. Pickett
8/13/2014
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 2/25/2015 8:40:00 PM
Beautiful Jared Pickett! Verlena
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Date: 12/26/2014 11:45:00 PM
JARED, Congratulations -- This is a great way to end and start the new year, having your poem featured on the soups front page. Hope your Christmas was a merry one! Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/28/2014 2:09:00 PM
I believe you did it anyway...didn't you? No matter what you were advised!!! ;) I think you're a bit of a narcissist...but I enjoy reading your poetry anyway!! Noelle
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Date: 8/15/2014 6:35:00 PM
This is a very intoxicating poem Jared. Enjoyed... Verlena
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Date: 8/14/2014 6:40:00 AM
Well crafted triplets on romance, Jared
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Date: 8/13/2014 1:04:00 PM
Well played Jared....the girls will be lining up...cheers
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Date: 8/13/2014 11:42:00 AM
well paced triplets, good job
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Date: 8/13/2014 11:14:00 AM
- Jared, a beautiful and romantic poetry - Love conquers everything - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/13/2014 11:21:00 AM
- Romantic poetry ..... I admit it! .....,I melt :)))
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Jared Pickett
Date: 8/13/2014 11:18:00 AM
I knew you would like this poem..:-) Thank you for your kind words my friend!:JP)
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