It Dawns On Me

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I wake up next to no one right at dawn
to check for late night texts that don't exist
The paperboy throws news toward the lawn
and moves on, even though he knows he missed

I (yawning) fight to brush the blues away
but when I touch my eyes, I find them wet
God! I could not foresee the dawning day
when you would leave for someone you just met

We've been together since the dawn of man
but looking back, it's clear that things weren't great
Im cooking, but here I turn from the pan
to stare at my reflection in a plate

You're gone. And as my breakfast burns to black,
it dawns on me that I don't want you back

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07/22/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 7/31/2018 11:17:00 AM
Last line brings it home. Nice.
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Date: 7/28/2018 5:58:00 PM
Oh wow! Did not expect that last line but perfect! This is so beautifully written with emotion. A fave for me. Congratulations on your win.
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Lycia Harding
Date: 7/29/2018 12:36:00 AM
Hi Susan - thank you! xoxo
Date: 7/27/2018 3:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win,Lycia . I enjoyed reading this beautiful well written sonnet. Hugs Eve
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Lycia Harding
Date: 7/27/2018 4:31:00 PM
Hi, Eve. Thank you! xoxo
Date: 7/27/2018 11:42:00 AM
Oh, there is a wonderful revelation in the ending of your masterful sonnet Lycia! Congratulations on your deserving win. I loved your entry! : )
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Lycia Harding
Date: 7/27/2018 4:44:00 PM
Hi, Connie. Thank you! xoxo
Date: 7/22/2018 9:49:00 PM
A tragic lost love sonnet but with an empowering closing couplet, Lycia. Like Taai, I love the nuanced used of the word dawn and the great emotional imagery.. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Lycia Harding
Date: 7/27/2018 4:42:00 PM
Hi, Susan. Thank you!
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