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It Could Have Been a Simple

it could have been a simple roll of the dice a perchance moment as the fullness of the moon reaped my heart in its' scythe i could have been caught in one of those lonely minutes that invade life for no reason perchance loses all meaning when one comes to know questions falter all reason and logic answers were in the act when your hand folded into mine chances are never chances when our lips met the dice were loaded a point in time which never requires a why OKC 6/22 a thank you to Rupi Kaur, a young poet who is a beacon that love poetry lives yet

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Date: 6/11/2023 10:44:00 AM
Nice love poem. "As the fullness of the moon reaped my heart in its scythe," is a great line. Yep, the dice were loaded. lol
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Timothy Ray
Date: 6/11/2023 10:55:00 AM
which brings back memories of Russian Roulette....LOL
Date: 6/13/2022 11:48:00 AM
I like your four last lines on the roll of a dice it was meant to be. Well written romantic piece. love phyl
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Timothy Ray
Date: 6/11/2023 10:54:00 AM
thank you Phyllis

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