It Could Be Worse

Why did she do such a thing
How much pain it brings
It feels like I cant breathe
But she does still love me 
And I love her 
Though it is hard to 
It could be worse 
Because now she is free
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Agustin Avatar
April 24, 2024 at 1:08 AM
I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Aloysius Avatar
May 31, 2020 at 1:56 AM
simple, but fascinating
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 29, 2020 at 5:23 PM
Hello Tylan Dyck, yes she still loves you. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Green Avatar
May 29, 2019 at 8:48 PM
GREAT POEM!!! LOVED IT
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