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It Caught My Eye

I drove by snowbanks with mountains in view Pleasant thoughts traveled with me on my ride Under deep blue skies, in a bright sun’s golden hue When it caught my eye, flying from the side A Bald Eagle soared out of trees I passed Pleasant thoughts traveled with me on my ride A sight captured in my mind, now to last A clear elegant flight, welcomed me A Bald Eagle flew out of trees I passed So grateful for a surprise sight to see Nothing but a smile was left on my face A clear elegant flight, welcomed me My thoughts now lifted to another place Things we may see next, we do not know Nothing but a smile was left on my face We seek answers, yet so much to know I drove by snowbanks with mountains in view An eagle caught my eye, star of the show Under deep blue skies, in sun’s bright golden hue Heidi Sands 3/9/19

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Date: 3/10/2019 8:18:00 AM
You did this form very well.. I love the flow and imagery to this..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/10/2019 2:49:00 PM
Thank you very much Silent One :) I appreciate your comment and support!
Date: 3/10/2019 7:57:00 AM
Beautiful imagery in this enchanting poem..I enjoyed the flow and rhythm. A FAVE. You write so well in this form, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/10/2019 2:49:00 PM
Thank you so much Vijay. I am happy you enjoyed it and consider it a FAVE. It was a beautiful sight to see, the other day! :)
Date: 3/9/2019 10:48:00 PM
you look at nature with such depth and keen observation, heidi...fly on like an eagle; remarkable work!...huggs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/10/2019 7:22:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comment and support Nette :) Have a nice day!
Date: 3/9/2019 6:15:00 PM
We have an eagle that comes by every so often. I am glad we do not have to worry about snow. Nicely done. Easy flow.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 3/9/2019 7:38:00 PM
That is nice you have one nearby. Thank you for your kind comment :)

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