It Can'T Be Over

It can't be over

You say you can't trust me,
that, suddenly I've changed
what gives you that impression?
it's you that's acting strange!

You know I've always loved you,
more than anyone can
you've been my one and only
and I am still your man

Chorus

I can see you're on your way,
slipping...away from me
starting your new life...
and I'm not in your plans
you really took me by surprise
whatever happened to forever?
It can't be over,
cause I just don't understand.


Why can't you believe me,
there's no one else but you,
I guess, you never knew me
if you think I could betray you!

We've lived our life in stages,
beat the drama, beat it all,
I can see you've won best actress
it's our love's final curtain call


Chorus

I can see you're on your way,
slipping...away from me
starting your new life...
and I'm not in your plans
you really took me by surprise...
whatever happened to forever?
It can't be over,
cause I just don't understand.


There's a war inside you,
I can see it in your eyes
I love you more than ever,
is this how our love dies?

You must fight your delusion,
that leaving is your fate,
I pray, that you'll believe me,
and come back... before it's too late.


Chorus

I can see you're on your way,
slipping...away from me
starting your new life...
and I'm not in your plans
you really took me by surprise...
whatever happened to forever?
It can't be over,
cause I just don't understand.

Repeat chorus
fade to zero

John Derek Hamilton
September 04,2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Ajmal Avatar
September 9, 2017 at 1:22 PM
A very beautiful written poem, well I must say that you re a really good poet, I ve read quite alot of your poems and all of them are better than one another, I really like every single poem of yours and this one is no different, like you I also only write love poems, find time someday to read them, and continue to write these heartfelt poems, I ll be looking for your poems
Hamilton Avatar
September 9, 2017 at 1:33 PM
Thanks Faraz for your generous comments, I will take a look at your page, thanks for the visit and nice comment!
Dietrich Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 6:46 PM
John, how I wish I could hear your lyrics with tunes to them. I bet they would sound so awesome. Thanks for my win in your last contest. You do a lot for the community by sponsoring contests. I drifted away from doing it but I admire those who keep on!
Hamilton Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 8:29 PM
My seagull and the dove song should be ready this week, I'll post it as soon as I can, thanks for your positive feedback on my songs, it keeps me going.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 5:38 PM
John continue to write your poetry.you need a hug.
Hamilton Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 8:27 PM
I've had a few the last few days, family and friends are very supportive.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 5:36 PM
A very sad love song poem you wrote. Maybe she needs time to think things out. Maybe she will return to you one day. Who knows. A sad love song. Have a nice evening my friend.
Hamilton Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 8:26 PM
Thanks for the hopeful thoughts, it's good to be positive, thanks for the kind remarks.
Allison Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 2:42 PM
Absolutely heartbreakingly sad lyrics and I'm sorry that you say it's for real john:-( hugs Jan xx
Hamilton Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 8:25 PM
Thanks Jan, just when I think there's no more tears left, they find their way out again, I appreciate the kind words.
Y. Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 1:39 PM
Hi John, You are an amazing song writer. You write from the heart and that is why many relate to your heartfelt words. I am so sorry to hear this is true:( Alexis
Hamilton Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 8:24 PM
Thanks Alexis, I appreciate the confidence in the writing, songs come easier to me than poetry. Yes it's a sad situation, will be a test of our love and devotion.
Sands Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 1:11 PM
Oh my word John! This is a very powerful song , well written and so sad to hear, this time for real. Please keep on writing. Take care
Hamilton Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 8:22 PM
Thanks Heidi, it's very tough, thanks for your support!
Hamilton Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 8:21 PM
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