It Came Upon Him

He discovered how to connect and merge, or such discovered him. His five senses did not become six, but a number closer to one. It came upon him, that he was one with everything, all that his mind and eyes perceived, be they an ant or a mountain, nothing was separate from him. All was his mind. Water drooled over mossy stones, he smelled the splash of foaming atoms, the explosive opening of watery buds. All was an energetic flow of synchronicity. His body resonated to the mineral dance, the vibrations within rocks and pebbles, a living Word of light joining all things. A swan rose up, wings clattering, aural ligaments pulling white wingspans, through a Catherine Wheel of sound. Senses flew together, forming waterfalls of reality. He understood that these imaginative insights, expanded the creativity of the universal. Sunlit raindrops bloomed like new-birthed planets. The instinctive thoughts of voles and frogs, revealed as a singular cosmos, of co-terminus existences. As he looked upon this seamless world he knew he had the potential. to leave footprints on the sky and sea! This revelation turned his consciousness upon a diamond-sharp laith, creating the radiance of a holy grail, one great enough to hold all the innumerable Sons of God.

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Date: 1/10/2024 7:22:00 AM
My, my, my! An outstanding write, Eric. Clear fav
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Date: 1/10/2024 10:02:00 AM
Thank you Unseeking Seeker, food to get feedback on this one! Cheers John.
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