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It Belongs to Me and My Boat

my sea it belongs to me and my boat i float clarity of sealife wee bit of strife this byzantine ocean crystalline of emotion sand slips as hourglass scripts i love the tug time’s tender hug riveting the boat pivoting as I change roles and slip into soles souls of the long moon in sway and swoon what’s underneath the soulful wreath victory, how long is life what portion of me, a wife a mother, a sister, an other eventually death will smother but for now I rock the boat tip it over and float I belong to the sea It belongs to me

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Date: 7/29/2024 4:54:00 PM
Gorgeous writing....you really have a thing for the sea. You write about it with such clear talent. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/29/2024 7:51:00 PM
I appreciate you! I find the sea euphoric!
Date: 7/28/2024 2:19:00 PM
This is a really good analogy.. dont rock the boat to much my friend..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2024 5:25:00 PM
Thank you, my friend! :)
Date: 7/27/2024 11:46:00 PM
Very nice!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2024 5:33:00 AM
Thank you, Abdullah!
Date: 7/27/2024 11:20:00 PM
Loved the descriptive write and the analogy in your lines. It's comforting. Thanks for sharing
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2024 5:34:00 AM
Thank you, Eileen! Nice to see your name pop up! Hugs

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