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It Awaits Us

Darkness becomes us Souls in universal roam Eventually http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/life-7.php

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Wilma Neels

Date: 9/21/2010 7:09:00 AM

Eventually, I hope not hehe, enjoyed your haiku Mr. Fraser ;)

Michael Poyntz

Date: 3/27/2010 2:30:00 PM

interesting write...hauntingly real....if you think about it...or not! Good write! Irish

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/27/2010 11:07:00 AM

or not? Light & Love Jamie me boy!

Shoel Blow

Date: 3/25/2010 12:21:00 PM

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/25/2010 7:26:00 AM

A powerful haiku. Death comes to us all.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/24/2010 4:04:00 PM

Yes, this is powerful, james, and I am enjoying seeing you at soup. I hope you might check out my last two blogs, part one and two. I'd love to see you guess your numbers! well, gotta get back to work. Luv ya, andrea

Mary Meade Stephenson

Date: 3/24/2010 11:58:00 AM

So short yet holds such power....beautifully done James. Death is a part of life. Thanks so much for sharing and as always for taking the time to read my writes. Have a wonderfully blessed day~Mary~

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/23/2010 9:25:00 PM

The body turns to dust, but the soul lives forever. Very inspirational haiku, James. Love to you, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/23/2010 6:01:00 PM

Interesting thoughts about death. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/23/2010 4:08:00 PM

Wonderful Haiku James.. I just posted a similar one too... and just did a new blog if u care to comment... luv.. "Sweetheart"

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/23/2010 4:02:00 PM

This is a thought provoking haiku. It makes me think of several things. One thought is that we are such wonderful bright souls that when we roam through the universe in the hereafter, we will brighten the darkness. On the other hand, it could mean that souls who love the dark side of life eventually roam around the universe instead of resting in the presence of God. Okay, James. It is profound. I've guessed. Please explain (Soupmail will be fine. As always, I enjoyed thinking reading U.