It Almost Always Brings a Smile

solar powered energy make literal
sunshine electronics in a style
and when your vindicated
it almost always brings a smile
in wind whispers sounds of electronics say
pressed buttons held together... all to my dismay
so sequential and in good time
when lyrics make music and those words make rhymes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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August 6, 2009 at 12:43 PM
You certainly brought a smile to my face with your poem. Nice use of alliteration and imagery. Thank you for sharing this one with us and for your kind comments on my haiku. Have a good day! Karen
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August 6, 2009 at 9:55 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today and will be back to read more of it soon Kristopher. Love, Carol
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August 6, 2009 at 7:06 AM
i liked this very much great poem, this made me smile (:
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