Caroline Cécile Delacroix Poet Haiku

It All Starts With One

a single raindrop

hit the surface of water

ripples on wider




another tear

and more hit water

wider pond




a river

joins in the water

turns to lake




silver silent lake

circled by wooded mountains

rocks upon its shores

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James Fraser October 8, 2011 at 7:52 AM Fine Haiku series Caroline, oozing with terrific images, I like it. Many thanks for kind comments. Have a lovely weekend :)

Matthew Anish August 25, 2011 at 9:45 PM What happens after the water hits the lake? This is a fine example of haiku. Hope all is well with you and yours. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Andrea Dietrich August 5, 2011 at 8:48 PM I really like how it ended up a silent silent lake after all that rain dropping. An interesting one to read!